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Love's Condition
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Wednesday, June 20, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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you just know...
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Love's Condition
You are significance that becomes me
...releasing my soul to you
within this sustenance of love’s consequential bounty
Where I fall deeper, and deeper inside this dream with you
...this reality that we embrace together
this unyielding love
allowing our private thoughts to live outside of the dream
impassioning us deeper, and deeper, with no boundaries as we
Break all the rules that are given to us,
and you never fail to love me more, and more
even when you see my imperfections...my flaws, my faults...my shortcomings
...and too these marrs I try to hide...you see all of me and
you open me with such beautiful meaning, and clarity...
You see some deeper beauty that I wasn’t ever able to see, and
you offer into me, the fragility of my own being, to be embraced further, and deeper still, with inner strength and commanding absolution's
...all the while offering my love for you the freedom to exist without confinements, without any definable reasons
...without expectational conditions
this glorious acceptance of perfection and fulfillment
despite the fractures...
being all of my self with you...freely...without doubtful questions
...all the while knowing I do not believe in unconditional love,
you continue embracing every aspect of my being, with innate promises
...embracing the privations of my uncertainty within this deepset understanding
showing me the balms of your innate tenderness, and flawless patience
naked with who I am to you, and who I am to myself
…all the while never realizing how utterly beautiful you are to me…
I Love You…more than words can define..
© Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley
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| Reviewed by Shirley Houston |
7/5/2012 |
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| Beautifully penned, poet! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/3/2012 |
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Sweet!!! ☺♥
Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/25/2012 |
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| AHHH...YES! THE CLARITY OF THIS 'LOVE'S CONDITION'...IS SO PLAIN! I AM ADMIRING AND REJOICING OVER IT, COMPLETELY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Dye |
6/22/2012 |
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| I so love this poem you are such an amazing writer and inspiring me to be and do so much better to reach as many people as I can with my gifts. keep being you. your new freind Carolyn!! |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
6/21/2012 |
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Victoria, Such a sweetness within your lines of love.
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/21/2012 |
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Exquisite Vickie, love this line "naked with who I am to you, and who I am to myself"...nothing hidden, pure!
Hugs,
Christine
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/21/2012 |
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| a beautifully endearing testimony of your undying love ... two very lucky people indeed ,,, |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/21/2012 |
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Vicroria,
you both are extremely lucky, having each other.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
6/21/2012 |
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Pah, I don't believe you. I bet you just flashed those big brown gorgeous eyes and he was putty under your spell!
Super write, ole brown eyes. :) |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/21/2012 |
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What a beautiful and highly personal expression of undying love.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/21/2012 |
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This is Absolutely beautifully written poetry so heartfelt and meaningful just lovely and so is the photo of happiness Laura
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/20/2012 |
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Beautiful testimony quilled with the truth that sets you free, mistress...Bill is a lovely person and supportive of your many gardens in life where bisexual butterflies poke their proboscis in different flowers sucking out the sweet nectar given so freely tasting the pleasures of nature's way...you're beautiful in every way and I am honored to know you in more ways that poetry can describe...
With Love and Open Petals,
Sage |
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