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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
6/23/2009 |
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a place of peace is always a place to find rest and solace for those who seek answers to questions not answered.
r. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/25/2009 |
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A beautiful picture
But its the rains that brings such beauty forward
One must appreciate the rains as well as a clear
tropical day......
Love & peace
William
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
5/9/2009 |
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| I admire this on many levels particularly the recognition that we create our experience from the inside-out. This poem pulsates with the same insightful, artistic heart that first drew me to your work and that always keeps me returning. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/5/2009 |
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Dawn,
This imagery is deeply felt. Excellent!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
5/4/2009 |
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| Oh so hopeful and lovely, hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/4/2009 |
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Visually stunning poem, Dawn, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/4/2009 |
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without dreams we are nothing...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/4/2009 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/3/2009 |
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| soft ambiance makes this dream warm & cuddly ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/3/2009 |
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Ah such sweet and lovely thoughts make me yearn
for the same;-) Love the mood set with both
poem and pic...ET |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
5/3/2009 |
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| Wonderful descriptions. This one was like a short story without the extra words. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/3/2009 |
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A good time to meditate. Dreams do come true!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/3/2009 |
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Fantastic and beautiful poem.I can feel the tenderness and softness of it all.take care
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/3/2009 |
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| Dreams truly can come true. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/2/2009 |
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Looking at the picture and reading the poem's words make me feel like Robinson Crusoe most have felt, but, the solitude is calm and the soul without rebellion.
Georg
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/2/2009 |
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Dawn,
The perfect indulgence, good indulgence of course! You turn the tears of reality and loss and longing into a positive view of a paradise far away from misery and bring comfort to everyone who reads this lovely warm offering.
John |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
5/2/2009 |
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Very visual and comforting poem for those a part. Well done.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/2/2009 |
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| lovely poem--you write the setting so well that one can almost experience the rain on windows, smell of the tea etc... |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
5/2/2009 |
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| Another lovely and flowing work. Your words are always so soft. Warmth and Love, Carin' |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/2/2009 |
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| Reality of dreams is truly a comfort,,,this is simply beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
5/2/2009 |
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Beautiful poem of love and longing...the scene looks like our country.
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
5/2/2009 |
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My compliments on yet another wonderful poem Dawn. I hope your dreams do become reality.
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/2/2009 |
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| You are like a gentle soft rain embracing the essence of life, love and touch, you smile, and so do I. Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
5/2/2009 |
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Dawn, the way this write began I felt the emotion you put forth in your pen and the way you turned it at the end was like turning the page of a book only to start yet another chapter...a chapter that not only captivates, but one where dreams become the reality that they are...well done as you always write so very beautiful.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
5/2/2009 |
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| i needed something to coax me out of this funk! thanks~ |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
5/2/2009 |
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| Great poem, Dawn, and that picture is really beautiful. With a scene like that I think I could be transported to tropical beaches and experience all kinds of vicarious thrills. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/2/2009 |
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the negative vibes of the day turned to cherished feelings of warmth of what is to come...a wonderful write and so real it made me want to dig down a comforter myself for it is rainy and cold here today as well.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/2/2009 |
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I love this, Dawn. Permit me to share your dream,
perchance to sail away on the silence of the evening
to build sand-castles on the shore of a tropic isle.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
5/2/2009 |
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| Breath taking sweet lady..sounds so dreamy..have a wonderful and safe day Hugssss |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/2/2009 |
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Sounds so lovely Dawn, I enjoy reading your poetry, you have a softness about your writing style that is so enchanting.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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