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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/16/2009 |
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| DONT YA JUST LOVE MOVIES THAT...STICK TO YA RIBS?! IT'S USUALLY THE OLD FILMS THAT MAKE ME FEEL THIS WAY BUT I CAN RELATE TO YOUR EXPERIENCE...THANK GOD FOR ART, IN ALL ITS FORMS. YOUR IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS 'VIVID'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
8/30/2009 |
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Beautiful, breathy - like an invitation. Love "He touched her in a way that filled her..."
This is not the kind of poem one should read on a stark screen, rather it should be whispered in one's ear while one's eyes are softly shut.
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
8/23/2009 |
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Beautifully written. Oh, that life would bring us a few of these ..... before Cristmas! |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
8/22/2009 |
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| S p a r k l e s !! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/20/2009 |
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The emotions in this poem match the imagery perfectly. Romantic and soft. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
8/20/2009 |
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This is so very romantic and tender Dawn
I love it !
Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
8/18/2009 |
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| Wao, I tell you that what independent romantic movies will do to you. You should watch 'Once' I wrote a poem with the same title after I watched that movie. Delightful. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/18/2009 |
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Like the photograph, nice choice for such delicate words...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
8/18/2009 |
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| First kiss? It sounds like a longing fulfilled, or a fairy tale come true. Very nice! |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
8/18/2009 |
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| Romantic in its truest form. Well penned Dawn, hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/18/2009 |
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| so lovely and romantic! |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/18/2009 |
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| VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/17/2009 |
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Oh Dawn! how utterly romantic and charming!
I can recall feeling this way;-)... Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/17/2009 |
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| There's somehow a lot of life and light in this, Dawn... was the film French or Italian? It speaks to me of the light prevalent on French/Italian borders, Alps or coast... Conceptually, quite neo-romantic French, I'd say! Us Europeans sometimes believe that the hotbed of New Thought is across the Atlantic whereas, historically, much radical new thinking eminated from the French... damn it! :)) xx LOVE film arts labs... |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/17/2009 |
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Now, that's what I will call being gaga in love! LOL
But you never said the name of the movie!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/17/2009 |
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Sounds full of love and desires Dawn. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/16/2009 |
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What a fabulous poem, Dawn, I could feel her love. I loved the last line sprinkled with tiny bubbles...so heavenly.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/16/2009 |
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| ...like walking on air...great poem Dawn!:) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/16/2009 |
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| confetti, feathers and bubbles ... must have been some movie ;) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/16/2009 |
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Dawn,
What was the name of that movie? This has the lightness of gossamer wings, ethereal and floating,...and I love those 'tiny bubbles' at the end.
John |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/16/2009 |
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Very beautiful indeed Dawn love the way you laid this out.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/16/2009 |
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Gorgeous, Dawn, simply gorgeous!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
8/16/2009 |
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| Now this is romance at its best. Well done, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/16/2009 |
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Beautiful poem, Dawn, and the image is fantastic! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/16/2009 |
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| Like the metaphors in this gem of a poem |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/16/2009 |
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| My, my, Dawn...I must visit the movies more often. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
8/16/2009 |
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| A graceful capture, so sweet, so romantic.Have missed you so much. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/16/2009 |
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| Must have been a good movie to put you in this romantic mood. Because you mentioned a film had cause this poem I found myself seeing your words projected on a black and white screen as the two lovers (and yes, they can be lovers without the actual act, although what he did could be considered an act of love) acted out their passion ever so subtly and deliciously. Fired me up!! |
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