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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
10/30/2009 |
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Sometimes hope and strength are all we have. wonderful write.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/18/2009 |
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hope and strength are truly the best tools for tending the garden of life here on planet earth.
beautifully expressed, dawn.
always a pleasure,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
10/16/2009 |
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We need something other than ourselves to cling onto Dawn when the going gets tough, and by golly I know all about the going getting tough.
Converse daily with the King of Kings within yourself and you will find solace and a marked difference in your mindset.
Stick to it.
Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/15/2009 |
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| As long as hope and strength remain as constants, then love will bloom again, both inside and out. Faith, hope and love are yeast in the dough. Nice rising! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/15/2009 |
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I feel like I can relate to this one right now. It's an exhausting feeling. Shoulders like stones. Great job capturing these feelings.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/14/2009 |
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| GROWTH...NOT EASY...BUT A NECESSITY...SO GLAD, ONE GETS TO CHOOSE THEIR COMPANION(ONE NEVER GOES ALONE) AND THE ROAD TAKEN. THIS IS AN WELL COMPOSED WORK THAT ADDRESSES AN EXPERIENCE THAT ALL CAN RELATE TO...ENJOYED MUCH. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/14/2009 |
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| Important companions, indeed. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/14/2009 |
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| such companions help maintain our balance ... your poem exemplifies this ... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/14/2009 |
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Dawn,
Hope and Strength, two excellent companions...I only wish I had both constantly by my side.
This is fine writing indeed.
John |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
10/14/2009 |
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| You've done it again, Dawn. A ton of meaning in a few, well chosen words. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/14/2009 |
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Dawn in so few words you convey such strong emotinal tug of wars that speak of character and strength...excellant write.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/14/2009 |
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She is certainly blessed to be
in possession of these gifts, hope
and strength. Without them, the
challenges of this life would
be overwhelming. Well done!
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/14/2009 |
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| These are the constant companions of all those who seek peace and inner growth. Perhaps they are 2 sides of the same coin. Loved it. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
10/14/2009 |
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Dawn - Aptly titled poem. You express the stages of growth eloquently.
From:
rising –
like an ascending bubble
in an attempt to escape the
inevitable.
To:
yet,
hope remains
as does an undeniable strength –
these, her constant companions.
- David |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/14/2009 |
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Her companions are her constant strength! Great write, I truly love the way your mind works...
Ciao Bella,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
10/14/2009 |
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| Faith being the over_seer of all companions)~(contantly (tides of a soulful dwelling).~.evol-Ted |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/14/2009 |
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Story of my life... although I don't always know if I am very good at the rising part...sigh.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/14/2009 |
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Beautifully stated, Dawn - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/14/2009 |
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| Dawn, this so life in a nut shell..as there are always barriers we must face, it is inevitable, yet we seek our strengths to get through them, your writes are amazing,,,and you are too! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/14/2009 |
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| i love the final lines-they speak of the will to live and be and grow |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/14/2009 |
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Beautifully written Dawn, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/14/2009 |
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| Maybe not all good companions, Dawn, but at least these seedlings are the life blood for future haappiness . . . |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/14/2009 |
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To be, the essence of being, of be part of, to struggle to stay alive, to survive another day, another season.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/14/2009 |
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| Two very worthy companions, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/14/2009 |
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/14/2009 |
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| There is an elegance about this poem as it depicts the striving to be, to exist, to continue. Beautifully done. |
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