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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
11/13/2009 |
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| Amen! Well said, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
11/12/2009 |
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| What a vivid description of the state of soul, Dawn. Very profound in its waiting for fulfillment. That last last stanza is a quote that ought to go on every 2010 calendar..........Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
11/7/2009 |
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| You've been busy while I've been "away"! This is perhaps one of your all-time best in every sense. Indeed, I will be adding this to my library. The writing, style, message are absolutely wonderful. The last stanza, in particular, is brilliant. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/4/2009 |
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| dreams are indeed the stuff of reality ...our waking dream is composed of the mind's inner environ ... |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
11/3/2009 |
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The second stanza adds the conflict in this poem... showing the warring of the mind. I have to disagree with the line that says the powers that be aren't listening though... I believe they always listen, just that sometimes they laugh at our opinions of what we think ought to be... :~)
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
11/2/2009 |
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Dawn - This has a zen-like tone, especially the second stanza:
Yet, wait…be still...
there is no sense
bargaining with the Powers
that Be…luckily, they aren’t
listening.
- David |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/1/2009 |
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| wisdom in this inspired poem,so beautifully written Dawn! Kudo's! |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
11/1/2009 |
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| Interesting. Reminded me of the film, What Dreams Are Made Of, or something like that, with Robin Williams. A bit spooky. I like this poem and where it ends up. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/31/2009 |
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| WHAT A MESSAGE! ...FROM THE FURNACE COMES FORTH PURE GOLD... THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/31/2009 |
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| very nice- |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
10/31/2009 |
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Nice work Dawn...it is patience of dreams that create our most cherished accomplishments, one must truly have belief embedded within to have and become those dreams...
nice...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/31/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/31/2009 |
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A great feeling of hope in this piece, Dawn. Very well done.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/31/2009 |
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"...past affliction...an excellent teacher..." many haven't learned because they were too busy moaning their misfortune.
Nicely done!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/30/2009 |
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ah...I love this Dawn..it carries such a strong message from one full of wisdom..wonderful visuals
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/30/2009 |
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I like this one and it gave me a shot of hope when hope is needed
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
10/30/2009 |
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| waiting is so hard, when I'm Expectant and impatient...but I do appreciate the sentiment. Thank you for writing |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
10/30/2009 |
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Well penned. The old sayings all things come to those who wait and patience is a vertue refect well in this.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/30/2009 |
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Dawn,
Happiness sometimes comes at a dear price. Our past mistakes serve as the teacher. Peace, Ble3ssings & Friendship Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/30/2009 |
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| Definitely inspirational, and I for one would love to believe this since I do have many dreams I hope will fruition. |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
10/30/2009 |
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Wow- loved this.
This is pure inspiration on so many levels.
Take a bow, tip your hat- whatever your pleasure.
John |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/30/2009 |
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| Deep thoughts arranged this fine effort, Dawn / Patience / Something I have not had much luck with / I find as I grow older year by year I gain a bit more of it though . . . |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/30/2009 |
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| Much wisdom in this write.. |
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