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| Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader) |
7/5/2002 |
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| This was great Michael,,beautiful job,,Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
6/20/2002 |
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| Wonderful tribute and terrific write. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
6/19/2002 |
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| I agree with the rating system. I would eliminate it. Still this is a great tribute. |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/19/2002 |
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| Heartfelt tribute excellently done! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/18/2002 |
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| I like the next to the last satnza. Nice write. |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
6/18/2002 |
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| this is really heart-breaking and powerfully spoken. Hugs... |
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| Reviewed by angel michael |
6/18/2002 |
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never cared for the rating game....Shawn was my brother "n" was shot....he died pleading that I always write..and wondered why ......said, "good God I dont wanna die"?
dont know how else to pay tribute to a lost soul but, to write his last days....I dont condone drug use....was just a part of his life.......and that which killed his body.. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/18/2002 |
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| Creative write Michael...well done |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
6/18/2002 |
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Well Hummm,
Looks like some people
just don't get it..
I thought this was absolutely fantastic..
I am with Kay on this one....
One of your best...
Then again, you have
so many one of one of
your bests...lol
Don't mind me, I'm in a bit of a goofy mood today...
Why you ask? WEll, I
don't have the answer.hehe
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
6/18/2002 |
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| Well this is from your heart ,deeply from it,and it is beautiful,sad ...one of your best ,if not the best. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
6/18/2002 |
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hey, brother..your gift to God is ya smile
...i like that...
debby |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/18/2002 |
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| Great write. |
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