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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/25/2003 |
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| Erica, how wondeful is your poetry. You know I knew I knew you. From written by me right? Gosh, your poetry was familiar, and kept tugging at my heart strings. Love and welcome back to AD. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni |
3/12/2003 |
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God, I love reading the reviews. The women relate and the guys hit on you (generally). You certainly have an eye for form, bringing the theme full circle and the such. The word "soul" works in this piece, but I suggest refraining from using abstract cliches like "soul" and "heart." We've heard them a million times before and they don't really conjure an image, do they?
Clearly, a poet with Pontius Pilate in her arsenal can paint a picture of her soul and her heart that is specific and strong and...I can't wait to read what you write next. |
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| Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader) |
3/10/2003 |
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| That ending really nailed this piece, finished it off perfectly. An excellent write! Mal. |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
3/9/2003 |
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i hear you with a beautiful cry.. =)
nice write, erica. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/4/2003 |
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Excellent write Erica! You are so young, and yet so talented!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
3/2/2003 |
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| Wow...so powerful....so moving...this is brilliant! |
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| Reviewed by Angela Velez (Reader) |
2/28/2003 |
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girrrrrllll this has to be the most hottest poem. i loved it. boy can i relate to this. the picture is cool too. see you around
xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
2/24/2003 |
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don't know what to say...beautifully written echoing many...'sometimes the soul cries', yes...
and sometimes another soul wants to listen and hear, ah, erica...
what a bared, yet beautifully versed piece of a soul!
(((You!)))
so well done, god...I ....so damned felt, moving and loved the quiet/screaming...aching/longing soul cries here, they were heard! bravo.... |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
2/24/2003 |
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| This is one of the most moving and well written writes I have ever seen! |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
2/23/2003 |
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| fantastic |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
2/22/2003 |
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THIS IS EXQUISITE~
TOUCHES UPON ONES THOUGHTS
THEN WEAVES INTO THE SOUL`*
OUTSTANDING!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
2/21/2003 |
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a poem from deep in the sould
--- most excellent writing
---VVVery well written...
I like this best!
Sometimes the soul cries
You mock your futile emotion
Like Pontius Pilate
Cleansing the blood on his hands
Blinded by your father’s philosophy
And your brothers’ religion.
I'll be back. |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
2/20/2003 |
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| but when your soul cries this comes out....very good!!! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/20/2003 |
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| Rtica, you have not lost your ability to move the heart and stir the soul;-) Beautifully done as always! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/20/2003 |
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| The silence intecifies the pain. Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
2/20/2003 |
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| Powerful, deep and moving write. Enjoyed this very much. |
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| Reviewed by anne cunningham |
2/20/2003 |
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| least ways, when your soul cries, the tears come out of your pen ... hugs .. a. |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
2/20/2003 |
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It's always viewpoint, and it is so easy to embrace the positive rather than wallow in the negative. Very good.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
2/20/2003 |
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| Very moving indeed. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/20/2003 |
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| This is powerful write...deep and potent write...BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by awkward poet |
2/20/2003 |
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| I used to think the pain would never heal. Once I surrendered to the pain and allowed myself to swim through it as if I were going from one side of a murky lake to the next... I amazed myself and found strength and joy and courage. Good luck on your own journey. |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
2/20/2003 |
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| Passionate! Great read! |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
2/20/2003 |
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So deep and moving. Powerful write!
Jill |
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