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| Reviewed by Joey Lawsin |
9/17/2008 |
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Always listen to your mind and not to your heart, for your heart gives love but your mind gives life.
A moving narrative. Have fun!
joey
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| Reviewed by J. Murphy |
4/23/2003 |
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| Wowzers, this one is great. J. |
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| Reviewed by Russ Okamura |
4/15/2003 |
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| Very excellently crafted poetry! Remarkable, your wisdom comes of age! |
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| Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni |
4/3/2003 |
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| I can feel you tossing and turning, too smart for your own good. Still praying to a God you know isn't there because there is so much meaning around you it can't all be a lie. If you allow yourself to live through this, you will figure it out. In the meantime--write on! |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
4/3/2003 |
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| Very thought-provoking...hope your answers come. |
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| Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader) |
4/1/2003 |
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| a straightforward write...very well done |
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
3/31/2003 |
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| Intense and moving write... |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
3/30/2003 |
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| waiting for the answer might seem more of a dilemma, but it does come....you poem was raw and so touching. good write |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/30/2003 |
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Oh my, this was just wonderful!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
3/30/2003 |
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| Very emotional. Good write. ;) Silver |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
3/30/2003 |
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Excellent!!!
tony |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/30/2003 |
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| Always pushing the edge Erica;-) and what's the next plea...beautiful writing |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/30/2003 |
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A beautiful write,
excellent
William |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
3/30/2003 |
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| Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
3/30/2003 |
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Erica,
so true and beautiful and excellent write.
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Oisνn Breen |
3/30/2003 |
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thought provoking indeed
lovely m'lady |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
3/30/2003 |
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I love this wonderful poem
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/30/2003 |
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| clap clap...excellent!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
3/30/2003 |
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| A truly wonderful write. ~Trish~ |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
3/30/2003 |
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thoughtful and thought provoking
good write
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/30/2003 |
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Wonderful poem!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
3/30/2003 |
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| Wonderful writing Erica....you always nail your last lines......Ty, Dani |
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