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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
10/2/2007 |
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| what a beautiful poem... |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/25/2003 |
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Powerful and so well done,
Excellent!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
4/24/2003 |
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| Erica, yes finding nothing can be good luch. I find devils and witches and beasts. So sometimes I wish that I would encounter nothing once in a while. How is my beautiful Lady. Hugs.. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
4/24/2003 |
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| Powerful, reaching into the depths of the soul...splendid writing. |
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| Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni |
4/23/2003 |
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| You search and you find nothing. So what does that tell you about the search? You're the lucky one and you don't know it: Most who search find what they are looking for. Problem is, it's their own self-delusion "found." |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
4/23/2003 |
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| nice erica |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
4/23/2003 |
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| As always...great writing....great mind....Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/23/2003 |
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| An awesome expression of deep despair. Keep writing to find your way out. ~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
4/23/2003 |
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This is so very excellent.
peggy |
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| Reviewed by Anwer Sher |
4/23/2003 |
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| splendid work |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
4/22/2003 |
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| Lovely work. Bravo. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/22/2003 |
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| Well written Erica, I sense such deep yearning...I'm hoping for new rains to come and refresh the old ways with new life;-) |
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| Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader) |
4/22/2003 |
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The search should never end. I felt this write. Very good piece,
Take care,
Tim |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
4/22/2003 |
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Tomorrow I wait not
The will I deserted
A choice bestowed
A choice remained.
Shriveled soul
Cursed by fate
Bewildered path
Choices I make.
Stumbled in darkness
As I forcefully pray
The Hail Mary
Relume my life
I begged.
I fell.
How sad .. I feel this deep loss in this writing.. Excellent work! |
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