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Imagine The End
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Erica Kaiserin Mendoza
Sunday, March 10, 2002
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As I cut the vessels of my life
The essence oozed profusely
Shut my eyes
As tears ebbed
And recalled my life
In vain.
The pain I tried to strife
My breath I seized
Firmly I gripped my mouth
As wound unfolded
Once more.
Slowly my mind drifted
Lost in the madness of a sunset
Like a scarlet dream
Too vivid and too dark
Scared and cold
I fall open.
And then as light subsides
Found myself praying
A childs prayer
From a million dreams
I abandoned.
Lastly, I whispered
I commend my spirit
To the purple void
Of nothingness
As I smiled my eyes dilated
I cease into the hollow darkness
Of my lonely room.
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
2/19/2003 |
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| Awesome write. The ending sent chills up my spine! "the purple void of nothingness" INCREDIBLE. |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
2/19/2003 |
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| oh, yeah...quite a piece, here...intensely well written and the stark imagery and questions ...thoughts/feelings provoked...yes, you have quite some style and it works, darly, here...agree w/all...of the above, thanks, (((you!))) |
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| Reviewed by Sara Cunningham |
11/6/2002 |
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| while this isnt a good poem for my current state of mind, it is very well written. love you angel! |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
3/17/2002 |
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| Dark and intense...you have a powerful way with your words. |
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| Reviewed by Life Magick |
3/10/2002 |
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| Intense. |
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