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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
9/28/2009 |
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| Wheew. Hot one here. Love it. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
9/22/2009 |
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Sheila, it took a while to get here, it'll take a longer while
to cool off. I love what you do with your words and lines.
Wonderful! -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
9/18/2009 |
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| I'm with Dawn ... "I could eat the look in your eyes" ... fantastic line ... wish I had written it! Packed with heat, you must have steamed up all the windows in the Authors Den ;) ... well done! ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/15/2009 |
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wow! Sheila this is increbibly hot,melting the monitor,you
did this one to perfection! Wow again;-) |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
9/13/2009 |
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| a poem that I read and then immediately jumped into an ice cold shower -- this is at the top of my fiery romantic reads Sheila, you tease -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/8/2009 |
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SHEILA
Im Melting, hot stuff here
Above and beyond your call of duty
"Excellent"
Love & Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
9/6/2009 |
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Sounds like more than the heart is throbbing in this sensuously articulated flow of thought Sheilafriend. "I could eat the look in your eyes" pretty much sums it up to me. I'm sure though that you, instead, dined down the road a bit and the look in the eyes only intensified. (-:
Rock on ...
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
9/6/2009 |
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| Oh my..beautiful just beautiful sweet lady..well done indeed...stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
9/6/2009 |
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| "I could eat the look in your eyes,"...Sheila, I absolutely love these lines! |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
9/6/2009 |
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| There are heat molecules expanding here in this "Heart Throb." It is enticing and passionate. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/5/2009 |
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Sheila,
We Scorpios can be dangerous and here you are dangerous. A few weeks back I had to reach for the fire extinguisher when I read one of SC's poems; now it's out again!
You're fabulous when you're wicked like this.
John |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/5/2009 |
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Passionate and erotically compelling; thank you for sharing this gift, Sheila. Love, hugs, and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/5/2009 |
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Wow what a great apetite, seriously this is one hot, eroticly enticing write that the images just explode off the page...
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
9/5/2009 |
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oh sweet erotic love...I loved every word!
sensual desserts :)
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
9/5/2009 |
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| A sensuous poem filled with the excitement of the moment |
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