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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
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| "Grit and all, love that part of me, or, drop me to the bottom" love it! Perfectly said, Sheila! ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
12/14/2009 |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
12/12/2009 |
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| what a fabulous poetic rendition of, "Love me or leave me" -- and a metaphor of love it is -- bravo! -- Sheila, being creative in this art form is most difficult as I have discovered -- so many talented writers, so many gone before me -- so be proud to know I consider this to be unique -- peace and love to you my friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/8/2009 |
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| wow, aren't you clever!Fantastic bit of poetry, Sheila! Kudo's!;-) |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
12/8/2009 |
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Love me or leave me, interesting word choice to convey the message.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/8/2009 |
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What can I say Sheila?
AWESOME WRITE!
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
12/8/2009 |
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| Grit and all, yes even the grit. Beautiful pen. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
12/7/2009 |
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| Take you any day, er your writing I mean. Pearl of a write. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/7/2009 |
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Striking work Shiela, your images are stunning in this one and the message so strong and passionate as to make every reader wonder what triggered it. One of your very best here.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/7/2009 |
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Are you serious? God in heaven. Such a pearl of a write. I have to say this. I so would love to meet you face to face. Respectfully. I have not the right words to qualify your verses, Sheila. Love and my very best wishes from the depth of my soul,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
12/7/2009 |
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A pearl of a write!
We are multi-faceted creatures
that require, at times, categorical
acceptance. I'm hoping that all
is well with ya'll.
Blessings ...
r |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
12/7/2009 |
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| Sheila, Your ability to face vulnerability, is very inspiring. You have Moxey. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
12/7/2009 |
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oh so sweetly expressed
all the fishes of the sea
also the many clam beds
and there are too…just as many
deep sea divers
Beautiful Sheila…
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
12/7/2009 |
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| Nice work on this poem Sheila... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/7/2009 |
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Perfect. Love me for who I am, not what you want me to be. Excellent, Sheila.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
12/7/2009 |
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| You show the vulnerable side of you--of all of us--and like you in the poem, we want to be loved for who we are--unconditionally. There is much said in this poem in just a few words. Well done, Shelia. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
12/7/2009 |
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| LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
12/7/2009 |
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| Much to ponder in this sad expose of what happens in life's quest for love and when sated seeks other conquests leaving disillusioned souls to weep. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
12/7/2009 |
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Sheila,
I, too, love how you've written this, the impact and honesty of the metaphor are marvellous...
"...Exposed
And
Raw
Grit and all.."
John |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
12/7/2009 |
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| Sheila, I love how you have written this...it says so very much and I love the metaphor. This is one of my new favorites of yours...it goes into my library. |
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