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Seven Up Bubbles
by Marilyn Seray
Tuesday, November 08, 2005
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ooOOOOOoooOOoOOOoooooooo

dancing, dancing on seven up bubbles
feeling light and bouncy-
giddy from the fizz

twisting turning, never missing a step
on crystalline pops

high jumps, low jumps
catch the sun jumps-

embracing a world where nothing makes
sense
but everything is clear

a wave of foam
a refreshing dive
cleansing strength to dance again
on seven up bubbles


MS 11.8.05

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Reviewed by jude forese
cute, whimsical poem bursting with smiles ...
Reviewed by Jane Rodway
:) This is a smile, happy dancy, jivey poem- love it.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara
Ok now that I am craving a bottle of 7-Up and a dance let me say Marilyn this is a crisp bubbly melodic and refreshing write you have here! I enjoyed this one!

~Nikki~
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
yes! as refreshing as a cold glass of 7-Up, as someone said below... glad I stopped over here...

How are you Marilyn? I hope things are well with you and yours. ;)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
To me, these bubbles are worlds. A delightful offering, Marilyn and thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you.

Regis
Reviewed by George Carroll
Your write is as refreshing as the drink itself. Good to see you back at the den.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
What fun! :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
I haven't drunk a 7-UP in so long
forget what it taste like
Great to read you sweetie.......
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Delightful offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Delightful write, Marilyn; sooo good to read you again! Where you been?? I have missed you!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
dancing, dancing on seven up bubbles
feeling light and bouncy-
giddy from the fizz

Sounds marvelous, Marilyn - Fizz On!
Reviewed by Felix Perry
wonderfully light poetry that cheers the heart and refreshes the mind, well done my friend.

Felix
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
giddy...feels more like champagne
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Marilyn, how good to read you!;-) This is delightful whimsy, and just what i need to start make my night off right! Love the bounce!
Dancing right beside you;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Poor Bubbles. Had a cat called Bubbles.
High jumps low jumps.

A poet and poem full of vigour.
Glad you found your way back to the den of fun fun fun..
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hello! Nothing beats the fun of dancing on bubbles. Gosh! Much better than walking on water?

Have fun anyway! What a delightful lively piece to read!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
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