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Seven Up Bubbles
by Marilyn Seray

Tuesday, November 08, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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ooOOOOOoooOOoOOOoooooooo

dancing, dancing on seven up bubbles
feeling light and bouncy-
giddy from the fizz

twisting turning, never missing a step
on crystalline pops

high jumps, low jumps
catch the sun jumps-

embracing a world where nothing makes
sense
but everything is clear

a wave of foam
a refreshing dive
cleansing strength to dance again
on seven up bubbles


MS 11.8.05

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Reviewed by jude forese 11/19/2005
cute, whimsical poem bursting with smiles ...
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 11/18/2005
:) This is a smile, happy dancy, jivey poem- love it.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara 11/17/2005
Ok now that I am craving a bottle of 7-Up and a dance let me say Marilyn this is a crisp bubbly melodic and refreshing write you have here! I enjoyed this one!

~Nikki~
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader) 11/16/2005
yes! as refreshing as a cold glass of 7-Up, as someone said below... glad I stopped over here...

How are you Marilyn? I hope things are well with you and yours. ;)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/16/2005
To me, these bubbles are worlds. A delightful offering, Marilyn and thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you.

Regis
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/14/2005
Your write is as refreshing as the drink itself. Good to see you back at the den.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 11/9/2005
What fun! :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/9/2005
I haven't drunk a 7-UP in so long
forget what it taste like
Great to read you sweetie.......
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/9/2005
Delightful offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/9/2005
Delightful write, Marilyn; sooo good to read you again! Where you been?? I have missed you!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/9/2005
dancing, dancing on seven up bubbles
feeling light and bouncy-
giddy from the fizz

Sounds marvelous, Marilyn - Fizz On!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 11/9/2005
wonderfully light poetry that cheers the heart and refreshes the mind, well done my friend.

Felix
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 11/8/2005
giddy...feels more like champagne
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/8/2005
Marilyn, how good to read you!;-) This is delightful whimsy, and just what i need to start make my night off right! Love the bounce!
Dancing right beside you;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 11/8/2005
Poor Bubbles. Had a cat called Bubbles.
High jumps low jumps.

A poet and poem full of vigour.
Glad you found your way back to the den of fun fun fun..
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 11/8/2005
Hello! Nothing beats the fun of dancing on bubbles. Gosh! Much better than walking on water?

Have fun anyway! What a delightful lively piece to read!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)



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