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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
8/28/2009 |
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| Well written haiku...I'm still practicing!...M |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/1/2009 |
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| A WRITE THAT GIVES THE READER GLIMPSES OF ONES FEELINGS...AT DIFFERENT MOMENTS IN THEIR LIVES - DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
7/31/2009 |
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| good one Lori, I'd say a final kiss is fitting, before the final quitting, cheers ;-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/30/2009 |
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| each one well written ... |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
7/30/2009 |
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| Silk flowers? Cheap bastard! You're right to give him the boot. Keep the wine though! |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/30/2009 |
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| Perfect, Lori. I particularly like the lipstick haiku. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/30/2009 |
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Intense and brings back a few painful memories that your ku's both the first two and the last could be appleied to in my own life.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
7/30/2009 |
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| Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/30/2009 |
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| All of them quite powerful, Lori. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
7/29/2009 |
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| Beautifully said, Lori. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
7/29/2009 |
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Romantic You....
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
7/29/2009 |
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| Enjoyed all four well done indeed sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/29/2009 |
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Lori,
Again, your touch is deft and sure, perfect for the genre, and I like all four. Yes!
John |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/29/2009 |
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| I so enjoy your haiku, they always have substance with cause to ponder...ET |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/29/2009 |
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| The first one is my favorite as it says so much in its inference |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
7/29/2009 |
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I can't decide if I like the first or second one the best, but why choose when I can save all four to my library and decide later. Wonderful words.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
7/29/2009 |
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Cleverly done, Lori...with some igniting thoughts in the first two; tender in the third; SO RIGHT in the last :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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