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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/13/2009 |
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| ..sounds like you are one up for sure...wtg! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
8/11/2009 |
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| great poetic rant Lori, I'm sure you are the total package, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/11/2009 |
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Wow! Powerful write, Lori! You go girl!! We all have the right to demand respect!
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
8/9/2009 |
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| Move over Reese, there's a new sherriff in town! Great stuff Lori! I used to be in the brokerage industry...another "man's" game if you will. The women who did make it in that industry were tough as nails and very talented. Same goes for you I'm sure. Be good. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/9/2009 |
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Ah, the old boy's game... It was put to me so succinctly, "I can do anything you can do, including peeing sideways." I demurred to her feminine rage, but still don't believe her early childhood skills were comparable to hard-won engineering accomplishments.
Nice write.
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/9/2009 |
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| Powerful pen, Lori... and yes Game, set and match! |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
8/9/2009 |
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| Love it! Especially the ending. Game, set, and match. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/8/2009 |
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| i'm sure you will keep up your serve no matter what match is before you ... |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
8/8/2009 |
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| Oooh I could see lots of volleys here. But I'm too old and slow. And you're still a bitch. (That is of course a joke) Quite creative. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
8/8/2009 |
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| Maybe from their narrow point of view, that women are property and meant to be used and taken at will. Stand up to them, Lori. Don't be anyone's bitch. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/8/2009 |
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Lori,
Oh yes! This is wonderful and strong and assertive and positive. It reminds me of Camus..."a slave is no longer a slave when he says 'No.'"
Excellent!
John |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/8/2009 |
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Hey, I have no doubt that not too many chauvinists would try to go up against you..skirt or no skirt.
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/8/2009 |
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I Think You R 1 Intellectual Lady With Unique Twist Of Words,i.e. My Kind Of People...
TRASK... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/8/2009 |
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| Never liked a bitch but they do need their day in court... |
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| Reviewed by Brenda Dobson |
8/8/2009 |
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| Applause! Applause! Applause! Been there, Lori. Ego-stroking used to be a requirement for many young women. Ain't doin' it no more...Ah! Venting is so, so good for the soul. Be yourself. Love ya, Girl...Brynn :) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/8/2009 |
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Packs a powerful punch, Lori - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
8/8/2009 |
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| Call it as you see it, Lori. Well said my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
8/8/2009 |
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It is the same story, different day, Lori. I learned a long time ago that my "charms" were considered to be of more value than my wit or wisdom, in the business world. In many ways, it is still a man's world, but I blame the women who play into their game for keeping it as a most successful business tactic. There is no future for a woman who uses her skirt to get into the game. As soon as they tire of you, and believe me, they will tire of you, you are out and the new skirt is in. Great write, Lori.
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/8/2009 |
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| Guess I missed something here. What judge? This whole sexist thing is really getting old hat for christsakes. Ah, maybe it's just me, but women use their sex appeal to their advantage every single day. We are not allowed to complain, only the, quote, "fairer sex" can do that. |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
8/8/2009 |
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OMG Lori Lynn, you're such a tease with your alert and upbeat vocals!
I adore independent bitches with spunk and wit.
Rant on, Dear Heart. I love it!
Richard
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/8/2009 |
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| NOT ONLY DOES THAT JUDGE BELIEVE THAT ALL INTERNS SHOULD BE NAMED MONICA...THE JUDGE APPARENTLY ALSO KNOWS EXACTLY HOW TO 'FLICK' YOUR 'SWITCH' AND YOU ALLOW IT...HUH? VENTING...GOOD WRITE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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