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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
10/3/2009 |
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A compelling write Lori. BRAVO!
Blessing on Your Day,
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/9/2009 |
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| Very powerful. A lot is said within the lines!....M |
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| Reviewed by Matthew Wright |
8/21/2009 |
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| Loved all of these, especially the last one. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
8/21/2009 |
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| very interesting verse to ponder my dear, this one got me, "summers end, no tan lines on the moon" this sounded sexual to me, I guess if you want tan lines on the moon you have to lie face down in the sun with the moon uncovered, hehe cheers |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/16/2009 |
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Lori, all great moments you've captured. I particularly like
"daybreak" and "wrapped up in his work." -gene. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/16/2009 |
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| these were all smart and well scripted ... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/15/2009 |
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Very insightful, especially the fast and Lori's moon.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
8/15/2009 |
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Carefully and expertly done, Lori. Love each one of these adroit Kus/Rus!
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/15/2009 |
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I ENJOYED THIS...LITTLE DEPICTIONS...FROM ALL DIFFERENT ASPECTS OF LIFE. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
8/15/2009 |
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| All excellent work, Lori. I especially found the yard sale very poignant. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/15/2009 |
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Lori,
All delicate and with poignant aftertaste...'daybreak' and 'yard sale' in particular. Excellent!
John |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/14/2009 |
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Lori , you always manage to get so much
out of your ku! You amaze me! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/14/2009 |
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Unique Twist Of Words Right On Write...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/14/2009 |
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Interesting pieces and how well they blend...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/14/2009 |
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Lori these are really good..my favorite is the first one.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
8/14/2009 |
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| Excellent writing sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
8/14/2009 |
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| The images are fast and furious and astoundingly real. Thought provoking. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/14/2009 |
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Lori,
Had to chuckle at the one about the moon. LOL! The visual that popped into my head - um. Yeah. LOL
As EdK said, all very good - and that last one breaks the heart with its sadness and truth. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/14/2009 |
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| All very good, and the last one is most powerful. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/14/2009 |
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Lori, once again you have thrilled and delighted me!!! I absolutely LOVE your ku's...Delightful way to begin my day. Thanks so much!!
Hugs,
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/14/2009 |
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Loved these sharp tidbits you offered us this morning, especially liked number three.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/14/2009 |
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| Didn't know what an RU is, but now I know what an Ru is. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/13/2009 |
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| Each carries a message |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
8/13/2009 |
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| I like the monarch butterfly between the roses. Very beautiful indeed. You can actually mix and match with these and come up with all manner of cool stuff. "a broken marriage, mothers watch, between the roses. "wrapped up in his work, a careless spider, on the moon (needs driving lessons!)", "fasting for change, a yard sale, now my own (sell everything and buy it back again, why not??:-). Be good. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
8/13/2009 |
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| Ok I'm a fly. But I never worry about tan lines on my moon. Need education. RU is a 3x4 format?? Patrick #5 was quite profound. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
8/13/2009 |
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All excellent with a splash of dry humor. I am not sure if I have a favorite but if I do its between the first and last. Perfection as always.
Take care,
Sherry
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