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Light - 4 ku
by Lori L Moore
Sunday, August 23, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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sunset-

a monet moment

on god’s canvas

 

absorption-

prisms play chess

on my wall

 

Andromeda-

seeing my neighbor

as she was

 

light-

seen by many

but only one

 




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Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 9/9/2009
Beautiful Lori! I like the message......M
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 8/31/2009
I hate the ku, but 4u, OK, 4 will do, sweet-2, CU.

Ron
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 8/26/2009
WELL DONE...MUCH SAID WITH A FEW WORDS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by OnepoetGem * 8/26/2009
kung 4 ku Lori, rockem sockem, cheers
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 8/25/2009
compulsive read and deeply absorbing
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 8/25/2009
Lori I think the first three are knockouts, just outstanding. The last one I'm kind of scratching my head over, as in, one finally sees the light?? Patrick
Reviewed by David Young 8/24/2009
Snapshot images riding the light wave mental absorption of a divine peace (piece).
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 8/24/2009
... according to Gene's definitions below, I think all four of these qualify, Lori. Such insight and perception: the Andromeda ku is sheer brilliance! :)) These are like epiphanic instants, as befits your title. xx
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 8/24/2009
Love these ... especially the one on Andromeda. Seeing your neighbor as she was ... 200 million years ago.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 8/24/2009
Lori, the Japanese poet Yasuda defines a haiku moment as one "in which the words which created the experience and the experience itself can become one." To me, your sunset haiku fulfills the
aesthetic moment beautifully. -gene.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser 8/24/2009
These are very nice Lori. Quite elegant oozing with serenity.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 8/24/2009
Lori,,I just love all of these :) just wonderful!!!!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/24/2009
The first one is definitely my favorite.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 8/24/2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/24/2009
very pleasant Ku's that create images as fast as they are read...

Fee
Reviewed by Ankin Timourian 8/23/2009
Interesting! Soooo much can be said with less words.
Very nice!
Ankin
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 8/23/2009
These images are strong and pop right into view- i really liked the first one as I often call skies "Maxfield Parrish skies," so I enjoyed your "Monet sunsets" and pictured them instantly. :) Michelle
Reviewed by jude forese 8/23/2009
excellent montage of ku ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/23/2009
Nicely done, Lori; substance for reflection. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/23/2009
Lori,
Exquisite rendering in each one, finely realised images and perfect impact. No favourites here, all stand out.

John
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 8/23/2009
Kool...

TRASK...
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 8/23/2009
from u...4 stately ku...reward's in reading

And that's a fact...you are sooo good girl! :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 8/23/2009
Brilliant!! Amazing how your few words inspire such deep thought. Loved them all!

Anna
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 8/23/2009
Each of the chain is exquisite, Lori, wish I could choose a favorite. Singly each paints such a perfect picture that with every read, a different one becomes my favorite. Together, they form a perfect collage. Well done!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 8/23/2009
I like your wording. Very nice. I'm more a 5-7-5 kinda old fogy.
Reviewed by Jerry Diamond 8/23/2009
Thoughtful and well defined haikus
You have the knack

Jerry
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