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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/9/2009 |
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| I really like this poem. it captures the essence of fall so well. Great images!!!......M |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/5/2009 |
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Waning wordsmithing at its best. Love the understated remorse. But hey! It's August, cusping on September.
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
9/4/2009 |
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Wow, awesome pen, Lori, I love it.
Now November I could do without but I do
love fall... and yes we 'await December's decision' |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/2/2009 |
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| THE IMAGERY THAT YOUR PHRASES PRODUCED IS OUTSTANDING...DONE VERY WELL...THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
9/1/2009 |
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What beautiful Autumnal images you bring to us in these verses, Lori. Sadly, here in No. Texas, we have very little of the changing color of leaves as we retain mid-80s thru October; then the browning, then the dropping of leaves by Thanksgiving.
Blessings and Love and Thanks - Micke |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
9/1/2009 |
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| well we're not far away from November Lori, you cooled the coming season pretty good in your poem, loved it, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
8/31/2009 |
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Autumn or Fall is one of my favorite seasons, as there is a wonderful hush and silence in the forest with the soft carpet of fallen and bronzed leaves
Peter |
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| Reviewed by james webcatcher (Reader) |
8/31/2009 |
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i love the fall because all the trees are lovely and tinted.
nice one
Jimmy |
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| Reviewed by Brenda Dobson |
8/31/2009 |
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Lori, this is a wonderful poem of imagery and depth. Most appreciated, the season of change is here...and you demonstrate
it with creative elegance. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/31/2009 |
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Stunningly imaged, my absolute new favorite of yours - well done, Lori! Love the political bent to the lovely scene -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/31/2009 |
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| The imagery here is wonderful. And you've reminded me quite well that winter is on the way. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
8/31/2009 |
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This is simply beautiful, and so colorful too. I love the images you painted here sis.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/30/2009 |
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Lori,
This is exquisite in mood, tone, colour and feeling. Kudos!
John |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
8/30/2009 |
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And with the snow
December must know
That the spring time
cannot resist her.
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/30/2009 |
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| exceptionally beautiful poem, lori ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/30/2009 |
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| love the imagery,Lori...November is a specia; month, which you captured beaurifully... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/30/2009 |
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| Lori..This is diplayed with beauty and movement..truly wonderful art! |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo |
8/30/2009 |
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| This is a beautiful poem. Very well done Lori - A true masterpiece! |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
8/30/2009 |
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Lovely, Lori. I like this one a lot. It seems we all may be rushing the seasons, here. It's still August for another day. ;-)
This reminds me of one of my 'seasons' poems. Oh well, let's all rush them on. LOL |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
8/30/2009 |
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| This is a gorgeous piece of work. Life beneath the soil, that sounds good to me right now. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
8/30/2009 |
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Very nice indeed.
High quality imagery and effect are the residue of your fall poem
Jerry |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/30/2009 |
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Decembers Decision,i.e. You Are Psychic Lori..
Kool.....
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
8/30/2009 |
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A Totally beautiful Nature write
Written excellently
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
8/30/2009 |
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This is so smooth and so well choreographed, Lori, it plays like a perfect dance upon the soul. Your images are clear and yet they allow the reader to be subjective and see it through their own mind's eye. I have been thirsting for a poem from you, being teased by all of your excellent ku. Drinking this one in, it was certainly worth the wait.
Take care,
Sherry
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/30/2009 |
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| Summer has not faded yet as September's door is about to open here in the North East. Well done and so easy to picture your painted scene. |
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| Reviewed by * Aberjhani |
8/30/2009 |
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Love the painted motions and rhythmic tumble of these lines. They read for me as if a great maestro were standing before a grove of trees watching leaves fall and conducting a symphony to the floating lyrical "colors of fall." Much gratitude,
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/30/2009 |
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| One of the best "seasonal" pieces I have ever read. Short. Not overblown with pomposity. Gives the reader something to actually "see" and does it in a off-handed manner which appeals to me. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/30/2009 |
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Well the fall is coming early in this neck of the woods as I look out to see leafs everywhere and the burning bush turning a bright red. Lovely write that is a lovely intro to the holidays month just around the corner.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/30/2009 |
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| All are highly evocative with fabulous tones of autumn and vestiges of shifting seasons (and how they merge and emerge)... but I love the strutting cocks the best... you captured their pretentious gait so well - it always makes me laugh how the wind cocks-a-snoop from behind, ruffling their baggy pants and tail feathers! :)) Sheer brilliance! xx |
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