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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
9/23/2009 |
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| good one Lori, like your style, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
9/21/2009 |
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Love the music, Lori. It was a joy to dance along with you
(and Poe and Byron) on this one. Never missed a beat. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
9/20/2009 |
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| The meter and rhyme in this is just wonderful. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
9/18/2009 |
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| Sometimes reality can be quite cruel. This was very well written! ~Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/18/2009 |
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| I'm so impressed with the melodious rhythm and rhyme to this beauty ,Lori! you truly capture the authors you've chosen! Kudo's! |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
9/18/2009 |
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Very well written, Lori. I so enjoy the meter of Poe's poetry, and this followed Annabel Lee perfectly!
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/17/2009 |
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Well penned Lori
enjoyed much
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/17/2009 |
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| superbly crafted ... a joy to read ... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/17/2009 |
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So much irony in this one it almost rusted--enjoyed immensely.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/17/2009 |
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| Excellent writing sweet lady...enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/17/2009 |
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| Exceptional poem. It draws the reader in and holds them there.....M |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
9/16/2009 |
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This is really true Lori. But there is nothing wrong in dreaming. I could see the stars in your eyes as you reminisced, and then the disappoitment when the clouds covered the stars. A wonderful write and I could actually see what you wrote through the images you painted here. Thank you for sharing sis.
Also thank you for your comments on my new poem. And yes I was happy when I wrote it because I felt a great weight lifted off of me. Thank you.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie. |
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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
9/16/2009 |
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Aren't we all bounce back and forth between dreems and reality...?
Great imagery, so well done.
Love Ankin |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
9/16/2009 |
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Romantic You True...
TRASK... |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/16/2009 |
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WELL DONE...WHEN IMAGINATION IS FILLED WITH BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS AND THEY BECOME REAL....WHAT MORE COULD ONE ASK FOR?
JOYCE - HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
9/16/2009 |
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| An ugly turn toward reality. Nice twist, Lori, I hope you were able to recreate the cast of characters. |
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| Reviewed by David Younger |
9/16/2009 |
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| Fantastic verse! I found myself drawn in to the story instantly and wished it continued on! Very nicely written. Thank you! |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
9/16/2009 |
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"To withdraw myself from myself has
ever been my sole, my entire, my sincere
motive in scribbling at all." Byron...
I sense, in your work, that you always
strive to be the best you can be. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/16/2009 |
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Great write and great flow, I can actually and was actually picturing this as song lyrics for the rythem is wonderful. enjoyed this one a lot Lori...
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
9/16/2009 |
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| Nicely done. Poe is one of my favorites. Sounds just like the Annabel Lee poem |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
9/16/2009 |
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| Very nice, Lori, you've captured it. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/16/2009 |
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Lori,
My new favorite of yours - instantly hooked by meter and rhyme - reads like a classic. BRAVA! Take a bow - well deserved!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/16/2009 |
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Great job Lori!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/16/2009 |
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| A marvelous attempt, and a powerful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
9/16/2009 |
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The transition from joyful imaginings into reality is a bristly one to say the least. You do an excellent job of instilling both spaces and feelings into the reader. Excellent poem, Lori.
Take care,
Sherry
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
9/16/2009 |
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| Publish as much as you can dear Lori! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
9/16/2009 |
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| Like what John said about your write. I'll let that stand. Nice. Very. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/16/2009 |
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Lori,
More Poe, for sure, but definitely you...and stylistically excellent; that bump back to earth is painful but very real and you don't try to gloss over it. I love this poem.
John |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/16/2009 |
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| Beautifully written, Lori. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
9/15/2009 |
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| Nicely done Lori. |
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