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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/11/2009 |
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A silent night, too. Only one star in the sky. Your poem makes me want to sleep...
Bye, bye.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/9/2009 |
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Awww Lori, you capture the moment well with such cheer for all...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/9/2009 |
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| And, Lori, a Happy New Year! -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
10/9/2009 |
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It's nice to be nice and your cheerful disposition shines through in this
amusing piece
I always say it is best to be unconventional anyway
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
10/9/2009 |
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| Delightful. Your sense of whimsy barely covers your sense of what is "fitting". This sort of "light" poetry is often more revelatory than the "serious" sort. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/9/2009 |
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| ..this is really great Lori! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/9/2009 |
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| Hah! You weaseled out of that big goof (on purpose) in a charming and delightful way. Summer waited until the beginning of fall to show up down here in the swamp. We had a cool summer, lots of rain to help it stay mostly cool, and now we are experiencing lower to middle nineties most days. |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
10/9/2009 |
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| Beautiful...delightful. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
10/9/2009 |
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| Thank you, Lori. A peaceful night to you too. Cute and well thought out poem. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/9/2009 |
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Delightful!! Loved the humour in your cute poem...great job.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
10/9/2009 |
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There is no need to have a generous and loving spirit be confined to Christmastime. I think the real lesson is that caring is a gift that we should share at all times. Nice writing, Lori.
Take care,
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/9/2009 |
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| We can always use peaceful nights, no matter the time of year. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/9/2009 |
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Ahhh what a lovely sentiment and ironically I was watching the sunset out my window this morning and had a sudden urge to write a Christmas poem too...oh well guess verse is where the heart is and mind...lol
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/9/2009 |
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| Like the flow and message |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
10/9/2009 |
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| thanks Lori, very creative switch from witches and gobblins of Oct, of course I like the vampire and the control and strength he has, but he has to watchout for the cross and stake, don't worry I wouldn't bite your neck, I'd kiss it, can't say that for some, some fools are worse than vampires, at least you know what to expect from a vampire, many of these mean old humans are unpredictable almost to the point of death, cheers |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
10/8/2009 |
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Peaceful At That...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
10/8/2009 |
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| A neat sense of humor Lori |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/8/2009 |
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You say September, I say October
You say December, Jesus remembered
October, December, September,Dismembered
Let's call the whole thing doff
Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/8/2009 |
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THANKS FOR THE WISH OF A 'PEACEFUL NIGHT' - BLESSINGS TO YOU.
THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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