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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/21/2008 |
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| Pithy! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
5/14/2008 |
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| That's a lot of truthful analogy delivered in a very good short poetic punch....Jerry |
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| Reviewed by R.D. Pounds |
5/11/2008 |
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Excellent, Leann! Within these three lines lies an awful truth...skillfully written. Your words convey that silken allure with which the deceiver works.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by susan abulhawa (Reader) |
4/27/2008 |
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| lies and silken-smooth thread...perfect! i appreciate the way you suffuse physical objects with the intangible. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/26/2008 |
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Your images serve to emphasize the theme of your write, Leann. Well done! Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/26/2008 |
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| Great write and so uplifting to ask for forgiveness. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/26/2008 |
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Intense and thought stirring for sure, I read this several times and each time I became more impressed by the sincerity and simplicity of this piece. Very well done.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/25/2008 |
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And all will unravel when the truth is known, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
4/25/2008 |
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Short and to the point, but spun with perfect truth.
I, also, have a poem about deceit... entitled Honey...mine is longer, but it talks about those sticky silky threads just the same. :~)
Cryssa
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
4/25/2008 |
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| Awesome. short but to the point. Liz |
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