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| Reviewed by serenety L |
9/18/2003 |
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Great one.
Short, but very well expressed.
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
8/29/2003 |
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So much said in so few words :)! Lovely.
LA Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
8/18/2003 |
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| This is really lovely, Tony. You smoothie. (smile) katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Marlene Dawn |
8/17/2003 |
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Hi Tony:
Another beautiful one. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
8/17/2003 |
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These few words speak volumes.
I'm listening.
Love and peace,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Floreann Cawley |
8/17/2003 |
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| magical..Floreann |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
8/17/2003 |
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| Tony, I never know when I open up one of your works what I'm up against. You are very gifted, and I love to read your writes. This one was no different,,,it's a real jewel. ~SH~ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/17/2003 |
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So Beautiful Tony, I loved this!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta |
8/17/2003 |
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| Very meaningful! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/17/2003 |
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| Tony this is so lovely. |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
8/17/2003 |
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3-5-3 Haiku is written in the Cherry poetry group based in Japan. It is by far the most difficult. I was taught by the moderator, Etsuko.
tony |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
8/17/2003 |
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..I haven't tried writing a Haiku...I'll leave that to the talented writers..
Excellent!
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Amanda Fousek |
8/17/2003 |
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| simple and elegant. Nice job! |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
8/17/2003 |
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Lovely Tony
Use five when you write
Seven for the second line
Five in the last line |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/17/2003 |
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Heehee! Tony, is this a new tpe of Haiku poem? I thought it was 5-7-5.
Okay, okay!...Just because it was so beautiful words, this pass.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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