A Sky Crying Reminder
by anne cunningham
Tuesday, October 08, 2002
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I so wrongly assume,
the years will pass,
in whatever fashion,
first one slow, perhaps,
the second building speed,
the third a lucky charm.
But this is not true ,
as certain days truly
remind the open heart
which tweaks the brain,
by rote emotional reflex,
bittersweet our memories.
Two years have passed along,
moving down the timeline,
fashioned out of grief,
but meant to be refashioned
into a more solid bond,
an everlasting connection.
It is said, done and easier,
as the days continue on,
until this fall rainstorm,
sheets of water falling,
the sky crying in reminder,
of love and relationship lost. |
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.... for hazel margaret drumm-cunningham
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| Reviewed by Sara Cunningham |
10/18/2002 |
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do you know something about grandma that someone hasnt told me yet??
good poem though |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/9/2002 |
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| loss is never easy... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) |
10/9/2002 |
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| Nicely written and beautifully expressed |
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| Reviewed by Sage Largo (Reader) |
10/8/2002 |
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| Beautiful work. I can identify as Im sure many can.Thank you for sharing your emotions. |
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| Reviewed by ConradFV |
10/8/2002 |
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| pain of loss. such a familiar terrain in the deep heart of my own memory....you've captured the "reminder" so finely. thanks for the share....keep strong, poet Anne. |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
10/8/2002 |
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| For myself, I have learned that the deep sweet-sadness for my cherrished losses never diminishes exactly, but evolves over time to a deepening of connection for those I am with now. Vicky |
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| Reviewed by Kimberly Bennett |
10/8/2002 |
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| Hi Anne: I used to read your work and you read mine on WBM I just happened to come back to this site today and was looking for some of my "old" friends from there and decided to read a few poems. Great job and lovely picture. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/8/2002 |
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| good write, anne!! |
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