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Of Dragonflies & Love
by Scott Allan Tacke

Thursday, May 01, 2008
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Of Dragonflies and Love

 

I waded in the river bed and watched the ripples gleam,

And stood with arms outstretched and my feet submersed in the stream.

An upward glance revealed the sun above the cliffs and trees,

Its golden warm caresses only broken by the breeze.

I closed my eyes and reveled in the whooping of a hawk,

While wond’ring what its call might mean if it could truly talk,

When fluttering past my lashes and then twice around my head,

An iridescent dragonfly consumed my thoughts instead.

My eyelids sprung wide open and I instantly could see

Its dainty body hover, then decide to land on me.

Moments of such closeness with a dragonfly are rare,

And that intimate moment was as silent as a prayer.

For once I saw her fragile wings contented not to beat,

But moved her slender form along my arm with her six feet.

In anxious adulation o’er this rarity of things,

I could not keep myself from reaching out to touch her wings.

To my amazement she did not dart off in hasty flight,

But took my gentle touch without a start, however slight.

The purity of mutual love that moment we two shared

Was spoken in our silent bond and with no word declared.

And I am sure that with each heartbeat and my every sigh,

She knew my wish was that she’d rest with me and never fly.

It seems though, in her hectic life of flitting far and near

That she’d been brushed and swatted at and could not help but fear

That I was like all others and would soon lash out the same,

And sensing that she felt this way consumed my heart with shame.

I whispered, "Fairest damsel, place a little faith in me.

"When you but trust you’ll learn how glorious true love can be."

Such efforts to convince her of this fact did little good,

She could not place her faith in me, and would not think she should.

Instead, that little dragonfly would break my heart that day.

She fluttered all her wings in one small burst and flew away.

And as I watched her helplessly retreat among the reeds,

It seemed my soul too disappeared among the waving weeds.

My eyes then saw the sun and hawk, and sparkling river’s shore

No longer held the beauty that they had moments before.

For somehow the encounter that the two of us had shared

Has caused all things in life to only pale when they’re compared.

Since then, my heart’s been forced to hope and dream I’ll one day see

That daintiest of dragonflies that chose to land on me.

Should she be found, I vow no rest until I’ve changed her heart

And proven she can trust in me so we will never part.

Until then, I’ll keep searching in the clouded skies above,

And ponder all I’ve come to know of dragonflies and love.


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Reviewed by Paivi G (Reader) 9/9/2012
A beautiful love poem--this is an emotional reading experience that stays and lingers with me as a reader. And even though "the purity of mutual love that moment" for the speaker, in this instance, appears short-lived, for she flees, this encounter changes the speaker permanently. As a reader, I regard the poem as a hopeful one, despite the brevity of the encounter, for the speaker declares that he will "keep searching in the clouded skies above" until "she be found." It is the speaker's passion and promise to find her and "[prove] she can trust in [him]" that makes this poem so memorable and effective. Simply beautiful work!
Reviewed by Axilea MU 7/4/2008
Soft and wise, your words have their own heartbeat.
Are all dragonflies the same?
Does one replace the other?
Your poem makes me wonder... trust, such a difficult word.

Axilea
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 6/29/2008
Nature does give back love, and takes you into the unknown sometimes and into the future too. Love can be found, I found my 2nd husband Tom and he is now a butterfly in Heaven, if not an angel. I put butterflies on his grave and have poems about them too.
Reviewed by Anna M 5/11/2008
Beautiful. Someone once told me "If you have a butterfly, then let it fly. If it comes back, then you know it's real. If it doesn't, then it never was." Love often disappears in the face of fear, but if it's true, your magical creature will never be far away. I love the rhythmical flow in this poem as well as the imagery and feeling expressed.
Reviewed by Selene Skye 5/6/2008
Passion so delicate and intricate as is the wings of dragonflies. You are a true weaver on this uncertain loom of life and love!
Hugs
Selene
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/2/2008
Passionate encounter with a tired insect that took advantage of your largess for awhile. Cleverly creative.

Ron
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/2/2008
Lovely indeed..great writing sweet man...have a wonderful and safe day..HUgsss
Reviewed by Charlie 5/1/2008
She'll be a shy one for sure, --in cocoon just now... go out then, look under the milkweed leaves and find her... --Charlie
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/1/2008
Dragonflies are amazing creatures created with God's love, with an array of wonderful color and this tale of enchantment is creatively lovely....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) 5/1/2008
Hello Scott, I'm taking a time-out from the den to get some much needed things done, but couldn't help escaping into your writing this night along with my 17 year old moonbeam daughter Rachel.

She says -- "When my mom read this to me I felt inspiration and hope to people that true love still exists and you wrote it with such gentleness. I loved how you incorporated God's beautiful nature like a movie playing in my head."

I say -- You've outdone yourself this time Scott. Almost to the point that I can't describe the feelings evoked from reading this outstanding piece. I wish I could do it justice, but I can't. The depth of what you write truly points to what God intended true love to be and look like. Any broken dragonfly would mend well and blossom on an honorable arm such as yours.

Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 5/1/2008
This is nearly perfect. Very very well-written, publishable for sure.
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