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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/4/2009 |
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Lovely tribute. Lots of emotion in so few words.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
3/13/2009 |
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| A nicely condensed tribute! |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta |
5/22/2008 |
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| Hi! I saw you on front page and stop by to say hi. Heartfelt words, and sorry for your loss.( |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
12/25/2007 |
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| This is a lovely paean to your cousin. Beautiful work. |
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| Reviewed by Chuck Keller |
8/3/2007 |
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| Very nice Senryu. The challenge of saying so much with 17 syllables is too much for most. You've handled it wonderfully. |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
3/19/2006 |
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Intresting lines...
love joanne |
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| Reviewed by William Haynes |
3/1/2005 |
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| telling a story in a poem with only a few lines of text is a rare gift. I enjoyed your work |
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| Reviewed by Leslie Bond |
1/29/2005 |
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| You said so much, in three lines. very good. Les |
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| Reviewed by Kijuana Henry (Reader) |
9/29/2004 |
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I have to agree with Deborah,
interesting form of poetry, 4-6-4 in syllables.
At least I think that is what it was? It was a great three lines of wisdom and new life happening to an old age actor. Tells the world that one can never stop growing and loving. Even at the young age of "say 61"? That is how old my Mother is at the moment. I am the baby of the family and just turned 34 years.
Excellent poem!
Kijuana |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
2/5/2004 |
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| What wonderful thoughts invade the light that spots us on stage. Thanks for this write. |
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| Reviewed by Rodd Jokre |
2/3/2004 |
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Hm, 3 lines of change...
Rodd |
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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
9/20/2003 |
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| Three lines and so full of meaning :0) |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
8/28/2003 |
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| What an enjoyable three lines! Thanks! |
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