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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
2/27/2005 |
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| What wisdom in this poem! "...without the dark I'd find no light...without them both there'd be no me" Amen! |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
2/27/2005 |
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| Poetry at its best. TY for sharing |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/27/2005 |
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excellent message culminating in the last two lines ...
without understanding darkness and pain there can be no light to gain ... |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
2/27/2005 |
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Wow Melissa, this was excellent, last two lines really struck my heart, outstanding poetry,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/26/2005 |
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| Excellent piece of work...BHUWAN!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
2/26/2005 |
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There is nothing ordinary about this write..it's speaks without prejudice..
Wonderfully penned.
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/26/2005 |
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Fine piece of work Melissa!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/25/2005 |
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The duality Melissa, who knows it better than you?;-)!
Fine poem, even with the pain!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/25/2005 |
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"To quit would be to give up living
everything I touch or see,
without the dark I'd find no light...without them both
there'd be no me"
Very meaningful verses, Melissa. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
2/25/2005 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/25/2005 |
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Your such a fine poetry writer
I have to have that dark to sleep...
Don't be gone so long next time
Have really missed ya! |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
2/25/2005 |
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| Well rendered and expressive. I'll have to spend some time reading your works now. |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/25/2005 |
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| The last line is so profound and you are right to quit would mean no you so don't quit. |
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| Reviewed by Carrie Deveney |
2/25/2005 |
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its true that there'd be no light without the dark..life is a balance between the two and you've captured it nicely. :)
-Carrie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/25/2005 |
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| excellent! |
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