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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
2/27/2005 |
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| Powerful and chilling analogies! |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
12/18/2003 |
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| Wow, a great poem Melissa, outstanding imagery |
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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
12/18/2003 |
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Quite nice. Well expressed.
Greetings.
Goreja.com |
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| Reviewed by Samuel Stone |
12/7/2003 |
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| Very well written full of emotion, delivered with style and eligance, Respectfully, Sam |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
12/7/2003 |
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very nice
thought i was tracking you, but discovered not, so have clicked and i'll not miss others
enjoy your work |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/6/2003 |
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| You effectively convey the feelings intended. Brrr! Makes me shiver. Very well done. Love and peace, Regis. |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
12/6/2003 |
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Melissa, you write so beautifully and the metaphoric sense of this poem is awesome and impressive. The Creator has indeed blessed you with the gift.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Aamie Burnley |
12/4/2003 |
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| ... you write enviably well. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/4/2003 |
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| the imagery in this poem, slices through the soul ... well done! |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/3/2003 |
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AN EXCELLENT PIECE MELISSA
ENJOY READING MUCH
WILLIAM |
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| Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) |
12/2/2003 |
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| WOW this is COLD and well delivered! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/2/2003 |
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Very well written piece Melissa!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/2/2003 |
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| yikes! chilling write; the lines "white popsicle fingers grab your throat" really got to me. excellent imagery; well done! (((HUGS))) to you and your lovely family this holiday season...happy holidays to each and every one of you! love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
12/2/2003 |
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Brrrrrrrrr...! What powerful message here. Love this line:
"while popsicle fingers grab your throat" Superb write!
Excellent work, Melissa.
Hugs,
Tami |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
12/2/2003 |
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Melissa. HI how are you? Your imagery in this poem is so fabulous.
what beautiful verses you have penned. You just get better with time. floria |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/1/2003 |
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Melissa, sangfroid! Exquisite poetry right off the tundra!
Happy Holidays to you and yours! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
12/1/2003 |
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Wow, this is about as cold hearted as it gets
Excellent images
I've got to put some gloves on now... |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
12/1/2003 |
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"while popsicle fingers grab your throat."---wow!
This will be a classic. Your images are always gripping. Fine fine work.
Thanks,
Emilie |
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