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The Suprise
by James D.F. Samdavid1

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The Surprise

She has never had a surprise birthday party
She wanted one so bad

I pretended to ignore her
And she looked so sad

However she should have known
I will never let her down

She will always be cared for
As long as I am around

The plan started back two months ago
We were to go to church and then maybe to a show

She had asked if we could do something special
On her weekend off

I had already made plans and started to cough
It was hard to not let her know

Our friends were anxious and wanted their love to show
So when the big day came, it had to snow

Are we still going can we make it she had wanted to know
I will get us there of that I promise never mind the snow

The time for the party was to be at two-thirty or so
I got dizzy as we drove around our town square

Why are we going here why are we going there
She quizzed me and looked at me with a strange stare

But when the magic hand struck on the clock
And we entered our back door I witnessed her shock

She now has a beautiful memory to last her
For a life time thanks to those friends of mine

I donít think I can do it again
But who knows love can cause things to happen

I will do so if the good Lord above will allow
I am going to plan for it and to do it somehow

© James Samdavid1 Fullington
April 23, 2002

Actually Betty Jeanís birthday was today, but due to her having to work we had the surprise over the weekend. It took a few months of planning, and things worked out wonderful. To say that she was surprised would be mild. Shocked would be more accurate.

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Reviewed by Sandra Corona 6/2/2006
Love makes miracles ... always. Beautiful poem and a very belated Happy Birthday Betty :)!
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 4/25/2003
Very good poem James. And happy birthday to Betty. Really enjoyed the rhyme and thoughts.
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 3/9/2003
Very good poem this was so sweet
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 7/8/2002
wonderful! glad to see you are posting here
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg 4/30/2002
Awww..this was so sweet..Happy Birthday to Betty Jean..
Reviewed by mz kimi 4/29/2002
surprise parties, one of the most meaningful things you can do for a loved one, I know.
Reviewed by Jo Janoski 4/29/2002
Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell 4/25/2002
this is wonderful you are a good man ..
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/24/2002
Today seems to be my day for reading about human angels! Good write.
Reviewed by Alpha Woman (Reader) 4/24/2002
Thoughtful, kind, and you have a twin?
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/23/2002
I love surprises...that is wonderful of you and friends to do she must be a great wife ( "wink") I already know by many of your posts that she is...;-)Happy Birthday Betty Jean!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 4/23/2002
I enjoyed this--indeed, "Happy Birthday to Betty Jean!"
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 4/23/2002
Hey cuz! What a loving thing to do...glad it turned out beautifully! Happy Birthday to Betty Jean! :)
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/23/2002
How wonderful, and so very sweet.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 4/23/2002
Loved this!
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) 4/23/2002
Awww...that was a great surprise! :)

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