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Detail
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Pam Patterson
Monday, July 28, 2003
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Detail
Days fold into each other
like slats in drawn shutters,
somewhat aligned, defined
by a sort of sameness, or not.
The detail, perhaps, lies in the slivers
of light or dark, that fall through
the cracks. Or perhaps it gets lost
in the vast sweep of the ordinary.
Pam Patterson © 2003
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| Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader) |
7/29/2003 |
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| Simple and fresh...very nicely done |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
7/29/2003 |
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Beautiful and deep in details! :O)
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
7/29/2003 |
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Very deep, Pam! Wonderful....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
7/29/2003 |
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| Pam, really like this. It's very easy to get lost in the thick of of things. |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
7/28/2003 |
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| Wonderful work. Bravo. |
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