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Last Summer
by Gianetta Ellis

Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Leaving behind the old to begin anew can be bittersweet . . .


Forget-Me-Not Photo:
http://illiyun.deviantart.com/art/forget-me-not-at-night-132396035


 

Last Summer
 
Upon the tended trail I tarry
beneath a Crabapple canopy
weaving a Vervain keepsake basket
and braiding blades for grass bracelets
 
while singing to Crescent butterflies
alighting on blossoms of Sweet Joe Pye
 
near berries I pluck from their thorny stem
wondering who will look after them
and the reed wreath I’ve left among the trees
in the hope that they'll remember me
 
when all farewells are finally sung
and the last garland is wistfully hung
 
and wind ribbons wrap the Aspen grove
lifting the treasures I last wove
the day long wished-for wishes came true
and the Forget-Me-Nots lost their blue
 
to a season whose time was ending
and to a dream whose way was wending.
 
 
 
Gianetta Ellis © 2011

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Jerry Engler 10/7/2011
The beauty and life of a place internalize for us, especially when we are faced with leaving it--and this is a great, longing description of such poignancy. I also had to leave a lifetime home behind with many acres of splendid nature that once provided not only for me, but also for parents, grandparents, and other family. Know you my beloved home, she lives within my heart...Jerry
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 8/17/2011
Bittersweet with such wonderful alliteration.
Reviewed by D. Vaineo 8/12/2011
Gianetta, Flowing imagery and one get smell
the the scented flowers. Beautifully written!

Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 8/12/2011
Ah, Gina, my lovely friend, dressed up in these beautiful lines,
how could you not be remembered? I assume of course that the
Vervain basked was lavendar... -gene.
Reviewed by Axilea MU 8/12/2011
A very harmonious composition, Gianetta, with those beautiful sounds and visuals. You capture nature and let it speak to us about all that changes in our lives.

Axilea
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 8/11/2011
Thank you, Jon - your review made me realize I'd spelled "braiding" without the "i"! How'd I do that?
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 8/11/2011
beautiful and peaceful--like summer :)
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/11/2011
Gina, the essentials of human emotions are braided within semantics and perceptions. We observe change with fear and also with great expectations for desirous outcomes at the same time. Emotional and seasonal which one controls is a rhetorical question, albeit moot. You have herein expressed the romance that is living life day to day and attempting to mark events and change as sign posts. I enjoyed this philosophical song very much. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/11/2011
A change of emotional and weather season,
Gina, and in truth, the one is the other'
somehow, this 'last' doesn't speak to me
of last summer but of the very last summer..
(am i being strange?)
perhaps it is, for all we know,
but the writing will stay on, that's certain.

John
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/10/2011
Exquisite and pure, drawing the eye to miracles all around and the importance of playing in the deliciousness of each season and every moment!
Blessings,
Christine
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