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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
5/31/2009 |
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| Your poem captures the essence of old age and that which accompanies it..Well done!...M |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
5/8/2009 |
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You handled this subject with such tender gentleness Jon Michael, it brought tears...splendid writing dear friend
love and peace, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/7/2009 |
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| rEMINDS ME OF MY fATHER IN HIS OLD AGE. hE ONLY LIVED TO BE 64 BUT ALWAYS SAT AROUND ON BENCHES AND WAS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME TO CHAT WITH AND ASK ADVICE OF. tHIS POETRY SAYS LOTS TO ME AND COMFORTS ME TOO. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/5/2009 |
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Jon,
An exceptional reminder to use our limited time wisely. There is something very comforting about the last four lines. Great write:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/4/2009 |
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| exceptionally imagery ... i like the rhyme scheme also ... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
5/4/2009 |
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| Such beautiful imagery in this, Jon. Another of yours goes into my library. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/3/2009 |
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A timeworn truth, revealed in gentle words.
Ron
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/3/2009 |
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My new favorite, Jon! Exquisite imagery
superb word selection!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/3/2009 |
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Fantastic poem,great work,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/3/2009 |
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It's a gift to be alive and feel the emotions that is in this poem. Wonderful work, Jon!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/2/2009 |
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Jon,
Warm, contemplative and deep and while the theme is emotionally demanding for both writer and reader the poem doen't degenerate into sentimentality but is propped by a fighting spirit and a strong sense of realism, and a sense of the wonder and gift of being alive. Excellent work.
John |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
5/2/2009 |
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One of the best poems I've read in a long time. BRAVO Jon. You now have a new fan.
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/2/2009 |
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I am moved by these contemplative thoughts, Jon,
and know that time will never exact its relentless toll
on the mind (and heart)of the poet who wrote these lines.
Peace and love o you, my friend. -genet |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/2/2009 |
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A sobering and meaningful offering, Jon. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/2/2009 |
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| Soultalk, and soulwalk, how gracious your lines, you carved. A beautiful poem my friend! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/2/2009 |
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Powerfully penned poignancy, Jon, incredible imagery! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
5/2/2009 |
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Oh my,this is a beauty sweet Jon..was a pleasure to read as always..hope you are feeling better..remember your in my thoughts always...stay safe and well...Hugss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
5/2/2009 |
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| so much deep meaning... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/2/2009 |
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Such content visulals in these lines....truly a joy to read!
Love and Blessings,
Christine |
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