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| Reviewed by C. Stone |
7/11/2009 |
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| Great tone and emotions. Blessings to you. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/12/2009 |
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A fine summation of life's journey and the seeking of meaning therein. Thank you, Jon. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
5/11/2009 |
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| YOU are a master of words. At the risk of sounding like a school teacher, outstanding work! |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
5/9/2009 |
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wow..great qualities in the begin...but turning sorrowful as we move ahead....so is life? if everyone faces the ups-n-down then where's the fun ...
i think fun lies to cake the verse/and ward away the fate in curse
nice write..dear Jon...good and warm wishes...neerja |
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| Reviewed by Milton Handfield |
5/9/2009 |
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An amazing compilation of words. Beautiful poem.
Milton |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/9/2009 |
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Such beauty in your words...from beginning thru end. thank you, Jon Michael, for bringing life and lustre to poetry!
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/9/2009 |
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Embracing Farrah as you pen these words. May that we escape.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/9/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/9/2009 |
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"defeat's indignation blowing
ashes of misery onto my face"
Love this part, Jon. Very creative! Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/8/2009 |
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| I see you at the wailing wall my friend, this will truly stick well in one of them cracks. Blessing! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/8/2009 |
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Jon,
This is a poem from a writer of experience in every sense, a commander of thought, feeling and language, one who knows what's required and asked in the ongoing struggle and joy life is. Your opening lines,
"I knew them each
by the naked qualities
of their purposefulness"
are outstanding and set the tone for the entire poem.
Fine work indeed.
John
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/8/2009 |
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Once again, Jon, you embrace the heart and mind
with the studied language and skill of a committed poet
whose words and rhythms linger on in this reader's admiration
and envy. Beautifully done, my friend. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/8/2009 |
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poignant poem of love wrapped in a quilt of guilt...
Excellent Jon Michael!...ET
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