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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/2/2009 |
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Under the cover of night all caution is thrown to the wind as inhibitions are left in the light and they dive into the mysteries of the night...as always Jon Michael you paint a scene with the talent of your pen.
love and peace, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
5/29/2009 |
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| Woderful images in this poem. It takes the reader there.......M |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/27/2009 |
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Jon,
Nighttime does seem so mysterious, doesn't it? Seems like anything is possible. We can wear it like a mask, thus less inhibitions, I think. Great images in this poem. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/27/2009 |
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Reminds me of the juke joints in the hot summer old South. Sexy, sweaty, eathy love in the dark.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/26/2009 |
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The imagery, Jon, the language of your poetry, the inner rhymes--
all superb as you entice the reader into the play of light on the
night, where neon spins Day-Glo hues and lovers steal a slice of
darkness. I love it. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/26/2009 |
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| Your words live vividly, beautiful poetry Jon! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/26/2009 |
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Bravo Jon this is a great capture of the magic of the night, I could almost feel myself walking the midnight streets of downtown smiling into the shadows at sights and sounds.
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/26/2009 |
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Excellent poem,great work,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/26/2009 |
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You ceartainly set the mood here John..under that molasses sky..love it.
Blessings my friend,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
5/26/2009 |
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and the mood is a wonderful dance in your words of romance!
Love It Jon
Embraced~Embrassι
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/25/2009 |
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Such vivid picturesque images dancing in my head and the sound of the ocean lulling all into a muted stance. Very piercing and mesmerizing...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
5/25/2009 |
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| Your use of language in this is stunning. Beautiful writing. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/25/2009 |
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Such imagery in these beautiful lines, Jon, especially love "molassas sky." Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/25/2009 |
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Great write, Jon; well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/25/2009 |
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Jon,
The opening lines are superb and promise so much and this reader is not disappointed, the poem from start to finish has excellence written all over it, rich in language, mood and above all, imagination and feeling. Kudos!
John |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/25/2009 |
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An enchanting romantic poem with light that dazzles the senses
causing moods of passion...Wondrous Jon!
love your addition to my poem, posted it...;-)
Eileen |
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