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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/10/2011 |
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OUtstanding piece...powerful!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Janice Springs Hamilton |
11/7/2011 |
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| I'm still reading you my friend; though my present labor prohibits frequent visits... with each visit, I am overwhelmed by your talent... I so enjoyed the way you metaphorically expressed this journey by means of sailing to get to a place called redemption! Blessings! Janice Beaty Springs |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
11/2/2011 |
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| Simple words with a powerful undercurrent that smacks of truth. Penetrating. --charlie |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
11/1/2011 |
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| There are so many thoughts 'attacking' my brain as read and re-read this incredible poem. It is JUST the right poem at JUST the right time for me. God always points me in the direction that I need to go and when I need to be there. I have been away from the Den for way tooooo long. Your poem is exactly what I need. Tak care and God bless you, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/31/2011 |
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captivating haunt of a write, jon.
resonates at a sub-atomic level.
moon shade and the quest for revival--very ancient & penetrating stuff.
love it!
peace & blessings,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
10/30/2011 |
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A "living" journey
worthy to let sail!!
~Jon~
You Present so vivid!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
10/30/2011 |
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A true poetic gem with a soulful metaphor. It begins with great energy in that bridging of "disappointment and lament"... then, there is this feeling of meditation and introspection, a quiet moment to be in touch with oneself. Redemption, a strong word, both meaningful and mysterious. Thank you for sharing Jon.
Axilea
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/27/2011 |
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WE ARE ALL SAILORS ON THIS SEA OF LIFE AND...YES...SOMEWHERE ALONG THE 'JOURNEY' ONE 'MUST' SEEK...REDEMPTION. FOR, THAT'S WHAT THE 'VOYAGE' IS ALL ABOUT IN THE FIRST PLACE. A FANTASTIC WORK! THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/26/2011 |
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Thank you for sharing this meaningful metaphorical offering, Jon. I am certain that many can relate to the theme that you are sharing through your verses here. Love and peace to you, my friend.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
10/26/2011 |
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A deep inner look at a soul searching for that path to redemption...beautiful and touching piece, Jon Michael...
love and peace dear friend, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/26/2011 |
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Splendid metaphor and poetry,Jon! you are a deep thinker,and it shows in your great work!Good to read you again!;-)
luv,
et |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
10/25/2011 |
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Jon Michael,
Combining redemption with sailing. Very clever. This was a wonderful write.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/24/2011 |
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a voyage of redemption is a journey into the soul ...
excellent introspective allegorical work ...
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/24/2011 |
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Beautiful honest soul searching plea, prayers are answered..love the line..."my soul searching for accord…redemption"
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
10/24/2011 |
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| nice |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
10/24/2011 |
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A most powerful allegory as one circumnavigates the forever changing seas of life.
I guess in Dover, Kent, they've literally done this, by digging a tunnel under the sea. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/24/2011 |
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Well done my friend...after just doing a collab with Christine Alwin along a nautical theme (Adrift/Anchor) this one is easy to relate to.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
10/23/2011 |
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| Expertly articulated poem reflecting feelings and emotions of deep human concern. Loved this very much, jon. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/23/2011 |
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Great allegory for the stormy waters of life.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/23/2011 |
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What a deeply profound and personal journey into which you have allowed us to glimpse this sailor's soul!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/23/2011 |
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For me, there's the suggestion of escape,
escape from what's unworthy and worthless,
escape to something morally valuable
and to a wished-for harmony where the soul
is at peace.
This reaches me within, Jon, My Friend;
i feel its prayer.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/23/2011 |
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| The mood and atmosphere of this poem seeps into my very bones, Jon. I feel I can know this soul intimately from only this briefest of cameos that you present because it is a state, a condition of being that perhaps prevails throughout navigating the waters of life that we are constantly cast upon. It also speaks to me of the constant "closeness" of the attitude of prayer, conscious or unconscious which, irrespective of calm or stormy waters, is perhaps an underpinning posture that keeps us questing and seeking answers to the drift of a journey we have no choice but to engage in. Powerful work and strong capture. Plumb deep and find peace! xx |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/23/2011 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! ...'I've bridged disappointment and lament the points separated by the narrows'...'to kneel and pray 'neath moon shade my soul rearching for accord...redemption'------- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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