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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
1/14/2012 |
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| "She" is a treasure as is this poem. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/11/2012 |
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Oh God Jon!!
I am definitely saving this one!
it IS a work of the heart..and THAT is the art of arts!
..am saving this! YES!
Blessings..
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/28/2011 |
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‘til she held my hand these drunken feet
knew not the harmony of tolerant dance
peg legs now glide in the flourish of tests
she leads I follow performing above my best
I have seldom read a more touching, eloquent or visual depiction of the esprit of love than this uplifting dance, Jon. The decorated language is so light and musical it truly plays a waltz on the heartstrings! There is an awe and a wonder here, too, that also makes it feel like hallowed ground. Just beautiful! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
11/27/2011 |
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Jon,
So beautifully written, as are all your poems. She's a lucky woman.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
11/27/2011 |
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| THEY SAY THAT OPPOSITES ATTRACT...SEEMS IN THIS CASE, IT IS ALSO A HUGE BLESSING...FROM ABOVE. MUCH FAITH AND LOVE TO YOU AND YOURS. THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/26/2011 |
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| BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/25/2011 |
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...I bet those drunken feet soberbed up and and gave a performance of five stars plus...love this poem! dance on...
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
11/25/2011 |
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| The combo of humour and the candid expression of passion is simply marvelous. And, like most blokes, I totally relate to this. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
11/24/2011 |
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An offering as flowing as a Viennese
Walz would be Your dance!!! *Jon*
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/24/2011 |
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Splendid offering!!
Happy Thanksgiving!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/24/2011 |
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Indeed! The right person will do wonders for one's self and life outlook; I speak from recent experience, Jon. Thank you for sharing, my friend. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
11/24/2011 |
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Outstanding writing Jon Michael, the right partner for any dance makes all the difference.
Peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
11/24/2011 |
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| Yes indeed, masterfully you pull the strings together of that special spirit that makes the puppet dance, I can fully relate to this, for I know that truth. Bless ya Jon! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
11/24/2011 |
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I cannot relate, my friend, for I always led the dance. On the other hand, for those shy on the dance floor it takes a great woman to lead them out. As my ability to walk waned, I found a strong woman who helped me survive a continual fall as we pirouetted across the floor, amazing the audience with the power of the dance that was all hers, to my relief.
Beautifully written with a remarkably unique set of phrases.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
11/24/2011 |
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You relate masterfully, this is splendid!
Such wonderful lines "Her crown atop my pate a gratuity/her disposition anoints rascally types"
Blessings this Thanksgiving and always,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/24/2011 |
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"..tolerance persuades a saint's etiquette"
now there's a thought and line to die for..
and that final line "...performing above my best'
is, too, masterly. Here, Jon, My Friend,
you perform magnificently, this is a poem
to savour and save.
Yes!
John |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/23/2011 |
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love leads the way and all we can do is follow in its dance and hope we can keep on step ...
passionate perfection ...
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
11/23/2011 |
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Jon, this an awsome description of a real friend,
And by the way, a keeper.
Excellent writing.
Walt |
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