Can You Hear the Sea Gulls Cry
by Tracey L Hardie
Wednesday, June 18, 2008
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Can You Hear the Sea Gulls Cry
When we first met
I knew the everlasting
affects you would have on me.
My darling
you are the ocean-
forever-changing
moment to moment
with progression and evolution.
The lull of your beauty, your
scent, your hypnotic, purifying touch
bequeaths my inability
to forge your passion,
your fury and possession.
The only thing that
really ever affects you
beyond your control, is the moon.
Oh, how I envy that power!
Oh, how I wish to be the moon!
To reverse this rapturous phenomenon
so you could feel the effects
of entrancement, of addiction
and to feel the pain and pleasure of erosion.
Oh, if only I could turn the tides of temptation.
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
9/29/2012 |
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| I remember this piece and always wondered where you wandered now I can see you gravitated to the moons effect Great write |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/11/2010 |
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Captivating and powerful, Tracey. Lovely verses. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/30/2008 |
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Beautifully written, Tracey. Yes, I live to hear the sea gulls cry.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
7/28/2008 |
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This is so passionately emotional, it makes one stop to think. The tides of temptation run through our souls everyday, but it is with strength and will power than we can withstand them, and not let them take us into the sea of destruction. When we have faith in our Lord, the tides of temptation don't seem as ominous. Yes Tracey, I can hear the Seagulls cry. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much lov ein my heart, joy to the wrold, peac eon earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/19/2008 |
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Beautifully passionate. A read that you can almost taste.
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/18/2008 |
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| I can hear the cry of the sea gulls, and the roar of the ocean. Dreams come daily of it and thoughts are always with me soothing to me when thinking of the waves, the sea gulls the tug boat sounds, the fog horns and everything to do with the ocean soothes and takes my pains away. Lovely write8************** |
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