home, sweet home! :D (by ronee', aged 10 1/2--world traveler!)
by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Friday, August 22, 2003
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ronee' is at long last reunited with her worried (if very relieved!) family.
i so enjoyed robert's series of vacations; and they were all delightful! i enjoyed them so much i may do the same thing myself; it's the only way i can get away! so if i (or ronee', who will be with me) drop by your den, don't be surprised; be on the lookout!
oh, maman! oh, papa! do i ever have a story to tell!
i had fun with robert, and he treated me so very well!
didn't mind one bit that i joined him; i am sorry if i was bad and snuck away~
but meeting him and meeting other authorsden friends sure made my day!
met eileen waldron, melanie, alexandra, and others too~
if i missed you, there was no time to feel blue!
was kept busy, entertained my new friends,
and if ever i get a chance, i would love to do this again!
i didn't get sick, no not one time~
throughout the entire trip, i felt fine!
didn't need any doctor or trip to the emergency room~
i was good, and i am sorry if i made you think i was facing impending doom!
but i was in good hands, everyone i met treated me very well,
and if i ever choose to do this again, i promise i won't put you through any more hell!
as much fun as i had, there is still no place like my very own bed~
i am home again, and home is a good place to place my weary little head!
(think i will go to sleep now..goodnight!) *YAWNING HUGELY*
~~Love, Ronee' Le-Anne (Aged 10 1/2).
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|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Your poem is like a breath of fresh air. *hugs*|
|Reviewed by TERESA CROWE
|This is a great poem. I liked it a lot.I enjoyed reading it.|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Home is where y o u are, Miz Bluebelle State Tornado. Hope you never, ever leave the Den!!! It would leave a hole couldn't be
filled. Love you more'n a cow loves Texas. . .long as she can
outrun ;). . .Carolina Moon Shine <3
|Reviewed by fare good
|My beloved sister your words are like the rainbows of heaven, thank you for your comments.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|O Karen as I was telling Sir Robert I have been so enjoying these vacation pieces of his, and you know I have also just as much enjoyed your replies/comebacks with his having Ronee with him. I have been saving his and now yours to. My original thought was to have all his den vacation works in a lil book for myself to show my non internet friends just why I love the internet and the den so much BUT your sweet precious write here today has changed my mind for an even better, by saving yours with his I have a den vacation poem album...all the better to show! YIPEE
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|You would have been a great grade school teacher. Your love for children cannot be denied. Wonderfully written prose. I enjoyed it, Karen.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|LOL, Karen these are priceless. ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well done! enjoyed...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A lovely write Karen, and I was delighted to meet Ronee, she is such a precocious child, she'd keep Einstein on his toes;-)|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so sweet! Beautifully done! I enjoyed these so much,
|Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
|a very good write..Floreann|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|You were a pleasure to be with, sweet Ronee'. **kotc**|
|Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
|I didn't see her at our 'Going Banana's' Holiday Club this week, she missed out there, we all had a good time, so did the kids!!! Jackie <> <|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Get your rest :-) Nice write!|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Welcome back, Ronee, glad you had fun, but now it's time to rest... no more worries now, huh, Karen.... super duper...
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Karen, very good write! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Glad she is back home safely!!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
adorable response...but is ronee' grounded now for making her family worry?
(((HUGS))) and love,