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A Spot on my Heart
by Lori S. Maynard
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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There’s a spot on my heart in an x-ray.
A little black dot, that is all.
Some claim that it’s just a shadow
while others say it’s a hole rather small.

Sure, my heart is broken, I know.
I feel its edges reminding me each day
that it still lives and thrives in me
even after you have gone away.

I smiled while remembering
the various times of our lives.
Hard to believe those times are over
at least, to your dreaming eyes.

There’s a spot on my heart...it’s broken.
It mourns for your own heart.
It cries over the day you left me
and it cries yet in my own art.

You didn’t look quite like yourself.
Your smile was filled with pure peace.
I waited for you to finally say something
and to put the silence at ease.

Your casket was quite beautiful
I’m sure that you would have approved
Everyone brought you flowers...
They brightened the wormwood.

I could feel you in the room laughing
over the fuss that we had made.
You were an angel right for the taking
and not a life that could have been saved.

©February 21, 2008 Lori S. Maynard



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Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/19/2008
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! SAD AND BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 2/28/2008
Looking back lovingly and keeping a part of you open to cherish long gone memories bringing what was back to life. This piece is filled with a love to span eternity....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Cryssa C 2/27/2008
Beautiful poetry that speaks of the hole that those we love leave in our hearts, but it is not overly sappy or oozing. Well done!

Cryssa
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/27/2008
Sweet pain of love and loss but yet never completely gone, and yes I have felt that black spot on my own heart, even felt it a few times, but somehow the heart reseals itself and moves on just as those we loved would want us to.

Fee
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/27/2008
These are compelling verses, Lori. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/27/2008
(((Lori))),

(((HUGS))), love and prayers - I'm sorry for your loss. :( Painfully expressed sadness -

Karla.


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