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The Perfect Wave
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Kalikiano Kalei
Sunday, February 10, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Surfing can be a fearful, frightening activity or it can be a wildly liberating experience, depending substantially upon our subjective quotient of personal courage and how inertially challenging the waves are that we have chosen to prove ourselves on. If the ocean is regarded as the mother of all life, the potential release one acquires from a wave can be a cathartic form of agapean love--unless it transmutes itself into a darker form of oedipal, erotic desire to become one again with one's alluring matriarchal source.
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The Perfect Wave
Undulations of the Mother Womb
Sinuating, slithering liquid contractions
Roll towards us as we sit upon our boards,
Just beyond the shore break’s outer edge.
The water warm, a placental broth,
Supports us, as forsaken creatures of the land:
Uncertain prodigal spawn evolved through
Many patient millennial epochs.
The rhythmic sweep of steaming crests ignores us
Rushing ponderously by to crash in frenzied spray
Upon the pyroclastic lava of the shore that sits
Impervious to all but the progeny of eternity.
To sit so, floating out at sea, the smallest mote,
The merest, smallest speck of fragile, sea-borne matter,
Is to grasp the most rudimentary insight into life,
That all our human fears are groundless.
The brilliant flash of hope-filled faith,
That Mother’s fluidic coital, sine-like spasms
Will never end, bears us up with reckless belief
That all Her waves are sublimely perfect.
Just at that moment coincident, it seems,
The green mountains moving under us finally
Grasp our bodies, furiously sucking us up
Towards our respective unknown destinies.
Borne high on anxious, colossal liquid towers
Rising far above translucent walls of streaming spume,
That moment of briefest immortality we seek
Occurs and ends again, but also lasts forever.
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/26/2009 |
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Wow! Awesome write....You took me there..exhilarating,exciting, like I imagine surfing must feel.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/11/2009 |
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| Beauty!! |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
1/17/2009 |
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| I like the sustained central metaphor and vivid images. Good poem. |
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| Reviewed by Clifford Kapono |
1/3/2009 |
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| Sounds like an ode to body surfing shore break to me. Next time get outside where the surf is designed to bring you in contact with the universe feel its power in the belly of a monstrous wave at Pipe or back side Halawa Valley, a big right at Honoloa Bay or backdoors at Honolii in Hilo. Got wax? |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/29/2008 |
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Does body surfing count? LOL Never have tried a board or been brave enough to try the really big waves, but oh, this looks inviting - excellent, Kine!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Branch Isole |
2/18/2008 |
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every sportsman will declare of his passion "a bad day of
(fill in the blank) is better than a good day at work" however,
Da Kine know the truth.
A Hui Hou- |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/16/2008 |
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| When I used to surf (long board 10.1, Heritage) I found that one great ride was enough to keep me going till the next time I went out...as i get older however I am unable, with two herniated discs and multiple lower body injuries and pain, to go out like I used to, but I can still watch and recall all those great rides in my youth...Peace thru Surfing...Ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/11/2008 |
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I'll take the "wild, liberating experience" as the sense of oneness and freedom is immense, well said....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
2/10/2008 |
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Many speculations on John Milton and William Shakespeare's superb lexicon of over thirty-five thousand words each ~ didn't impress me, because I can read any one of them without stop for words.
I wish that those that affirmed that the two great Masters had such vocabulary would visit Your Den for a heedful reading of Your literary samples.
"The Perfect Wave" has paid its poetical dues to the department of treasury of Poetry.
Thank You for adding value to LITERATURE, and for enriching The American Fine Letters.
In reverent admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
2/10/2008 |
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...great force penned here...of one who accepts the challenges...of one Mother's strength...above waters eternal movement.
excellent write...
John
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
2/10/2008 |
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| Oh yes,well done...HUgsssss |
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