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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
8/24/2009 |
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an excellent piece
Thanks for sharing
Peace & love
William |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/2/2009 |
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I appreciate your form and style. Your poetry flows like a stream on an evening at sunset. Thank you, Shay. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
2/28/2009 |
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Shay,
The second verse has left me wondering. You have an elegant form and tone that I admire. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
1/5/2009 |
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Shay~!
You have an exceptional poetic style - very nice!!
Best wishes,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
11/17/2008 |
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| One can feel the deep hurt in this well written piece. Holly |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
7/1/2008 |
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Interesting thoughts and a word choice that fits perfectly.
I particularly like the first two lines of the second stanza,
they sound so true to me.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/7/2008 |
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| This is so strong in voice and smoothly balanced in form, like it alot. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/3/2008 |
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Always stand tall and face all challenges head on, more times than not you will succeed, nice writing....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
6/3/2008 |
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"The power to use my knowledge for personal gain,
is a conspiracy that my heart is not willing to accept."
This is what makes you the Artisan of words that you are! Your heart won't let you give in either.
Wonderful Write Powerful. Thank you for sharing. Carin' |
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