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Alan D Busch
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Books
• Stuff My Father Won't Tell Me Revision #2 of Part 1

• Chapters 1 and 2 of My Molochim (under construction)

• Prologue to My Molochim (Angels)

• Snapshots In Memory of Ben


Short Stories
• These Lights We Kindle, revision 3

• These Lights We Kindle, revision 2

• These Lights We Kindle (revised)

• Cruising Route 66 With Dad, Revision #2

• Cruising Route 66 With Dad-Revision 1

• Cruising Route 66 With Dad

• Proposed preface to Alan's 2nd Book ...

• Is It Still Okay If Your Father Cries? TO BE PUBLISHED BY THE JEWISH PRESS

• IS IT STILL OKAY IF YOU FATHER CRIES (SUBMITTED FOR PUBLICATION)

• Is It Okay If Your Father Cries (Revised Final Revision)


Articles
• Jewish Humor

• I Grieve For Ben At My Side (final revision)

• I Grieve For Ben At My Side

• As The Ninth Year Approaches ... Yom Yom

• Fundamentals of Fathers and Sons

• Author and Friend Micki Peluso Leads Fight Against Drunk Driving

• A Father Muses as the Eighth Anniversary of His Son's Death Nears

• Making Lemonade ... Parkinson's Really 'Sux', Doesn't It?

• Parkinson's Disease Sux

• Every Day is Thanksgiving


Poetry
• Martin

• Fingers (substantially revised #4)

• Fingers (revision #3)

• Shacharis Musings (revised and published)

• Three Jewish Love Poems

• Zac's Lilies

• Shacharis Musings

• Revision of The First To Be

• May He A Teacher Become

• A Father Muses as the Eighth Anniversary of His Son's Death Nears

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News
• I Grieve ... Published online at Chicago Jewish United Federation

• IS IT STILL OKAY IF YOUR FATHER CRIES TO BE PUBLISHED BY THE JEWISH PRESS

• Reckonings A Language You Understand in the Orthodox Union

• New Horizons Features Alan's Story

• Alan on Facebook

• This Sunday, 6/21/09 at www.aish.com

• Read Alan's Short Story Published In This Week' s Jewish Press


Events
• Michael Medved in Skokie January 17, 2009

• Michael Medved Returns to Skokie

• Medved Event Update

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Fingers, A Poem for Kimberly (revision 5)
by Alan D Busch
Wednesday, September 09, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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I think this will be the final pre-submission revision ... but one never knows.


Fingers, A Poem for Kimberly

My heart leapt for you long had I waited,

for a gift of divine perfection would you mine be.

In awe was I of your tapered fingers I marveled,

on your birthday when mine eyes first beheld thee.

 

Side by side we stood rinsing dishes,

Our moment of you and me always I’ll cherish.

Mom fashioned twin braids for you with blue ribbon

hold on tightly lest our memories do perish.

 

A butterfly like none other fluttered by me  

Sparkling pixies dancing on toe shoe,

Tiny ballerinas with balloons and candy

Nary an eye saw through tear drops of dew.

 

I gasped when she curtsied, my breath nearly stolen.

Such precious moments number so few

My heart did break though mend it did quickly.

I shan’t ever grow weary of loving you.


Your delicate grace will ever inspire,

before me I see how the  shadow yet lingers ...

of loving you I shall never tire.

Are there any lovelier than my butterfly's fingers?

Alan D. Busch

9/9/09

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Micki Peluso 9/13/2009
Dear Alan,

I personally think this is good to go now and doesn't need any more revisions. It's lovely just the way it is.

all my best,

Micki
Reviewed by Shawn Ness 9/9/2009
Looks good, I've read works that were in revision for 30 years!


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