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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/12/2008 |
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| Liked the play of words knead and need. All in all I loved the whole poem too. It's meaning is very clear and it amazes me as much as the others I read of your. Fantastic write. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/14/2008 |
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You have shared the moment exquisitely via your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
3/9/2008 |
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| GREAT last line, and how true is this, excellent, love your poetry. |
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| Reviewed by Leann Marshall |
3/9/2008 |
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| A moment so fragile, so exquisitely expressed...This is lovely, thanks for sharing it, Victoria Selene. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/8/2008 |
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Knead you like bread... How oft I've used those lines..
This poem shows a beautiful soul... |
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| Reviewed by Sir Leonardo |
3/7/2008 |
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| wow...breath taking |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
3/7/2008 |
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...wonderful pen...in first person...you speak to us...and we listen to your many colors...
very well done...VictoriaSelene.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/7/2008 |
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Sensuallly wonderful....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by sreelekha premjit |
3/6/2008 |
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| loved the poem. has an aura of mystery to it. |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
3/6/2008 |
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| Perfect spacing, timing, monologue... and just what is a leaf edged in flesh? Intriguing image, that. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
3/6/2008 |
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| Fairy nice! ;) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/6/2008 |
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VictoriaSelene,
Absolutely glorious - beautiful!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
3/6/2008 |
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| Reach out into the unknown and touch a mind with verbiage unique. Create passion with semantics, poetic antics and spinning lore. I run my hand gently across the lace of lyrics you penned with immagination. I continue to be caught up in the web you weave with interlace and sticky rhyme. I await your next poetic delight. Thanks for sharing, you magnificent, poet. . Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
3/6/2008 |
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excellent form and style. i sense a deep moving within your words that matches my own thoughts. i must say i am glad i happened onto your site.
randy |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/6/2008 |
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I love the word play in this... need/knead...
You always make me feel as though you are talking to me with your poems...
Cryssa |
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