Waste of Time
by
Melony Cooper
Thursday, September 18, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Bad relationships only get worse
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Bad relationships turn into the worst
it all starts when they don't put you first
they start doing things out of the usual
never completely truthful
ungrateful, unfaithful,
almost hateful
conceited,arrogant,
the opposite of heaven sent
waste of the time we spent
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| Reviewed by Lik Great (Reader) |
11/17/2008 |
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| conceited,arrogant, that desribes me but love your work keep it up |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
9/22/2008 |
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| Yup, these are sure signs of the end, sad but true. Raw and real write. |
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| Reviewed by Sharon Brown |
9/20/2008 |
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| I like this poem. Very true! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
9/18/2008 |
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| Melanie, you nailed it on the head! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/18/2008 |
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Live and learn they say and now, time to move on to greener pastures....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Valerie Roeske |
9/18/2008 |
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| WOW, a true statement, thanks for sharing, Take care Of YOU !!! Valerie |
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| Reviewed by Joanna Leone |
9/18/2008 |
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| This is an excellent poem, as it reflects the pain, bitterness and disappointment of a bad relationship. In a way, it is great that such a bad relationship has ended. Sometimes, a man shows us his best and brightest colors in the beginning. They call on time, take us out, treat us well. Then, they change just like the seasons. Sometimes it is a waste of time, but with each relationship, you begin to understand yourself more. You will be stronger, and ready for the next relationship with a guy who will bring you joy. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
9/18/2008 |
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Hey Melony,you are right on the money in this poem.It is indeed a waste of time being in a relationship with someone that doesn't love you unconditionally and most importantly doesn't cherish or respect you.There's always someone better out there for everyone.Very good poem,take care
Edwin |
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