Do You Love Me?
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Patricia M Eichler
Thursday, April 19, 2007
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Sometimes when people are in pain, they feel all alone. When I felt that way, I found myself asking, "Do you love me?"
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“Do You love me?” what a sad song to sing
“Yes I do,” comes the Lord’s only answer
“Did I not form all this world from nothing?
Yet, see how doubt trots on at a canter.”
“Do You love me?” a platitude of strife
“Yes, I do,” comes an trustworthy answer
“Did I not make this world and all this life?
Yet, disbelief spreads its ugly Cancer.”
“Do You love me?” is an unholy wrath.
“Yes, I do, I come,” He answers readily.
“Let angels lead you down my Holy path.
I will walk with you to keep you sturdy.”
“Do You love me?” is a prick on the soul
“Yes, I do,” His one and only reply.
“This lack of love is not a Godly goal.
Rejection comes with an odious sigh?”
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/30/2008 |
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| God does love you, I love you, many others love you and your writes too. Glad I got to read this poem, while looking for another. |
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| Reviewed by Blossom December |
3/9/2008 |
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"trots on at a canter"
Hmm.
This collection of poems sound like they were written by a 13 year old. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
4/19/2007 |
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| Great inspiring poem Pat, I love you too! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/19/2007 |
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Patricia,
You wrote me when you wrote this one...been feeling down. A beautiful, yet poignant write; well done.
And I second Karen: welcome back, you've been missed.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/19/2007 |
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Sad write but so true. When people are hurting, nobody wants to listen to them complain about their ailments or pain. Trust me. I know. Very well done, Patty!
Nice to see you back; you've been missed!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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