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  Candy Rain
by Phyllis Jean Green
Wednesday, February 15, 2006
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          Candy Rain
 
Rain has to qualify, this one
won't make the cut.
Tickling doesn't count,  I whisper
around  an untouched pillow.  Gentle
was for hippies.  Quaint
term to google.  Oh, but it is sweet
to lie comforted by your refusal
to give in to the urge to pound.  
So good, you turned in your drum.
Sometimes play brushes,  I hear,
when not filling in.  Tickling
your night gig?   Feel you
on my skin, flesh feathers
make me entertain the hope
that you, at least, will stay
your sweet self.  Only tickle
until I blush.   Feed me,
sweet rain.  Hum something silly.
Hum Purple Rain.  I cracked
the window.  Slip in and we'll pretend
to be here for each other.  Have all
the sugar we want.  No cavities.
Tickling never turns to torture,
thunder is only air clapping
far, far away.   Closing my eyes.
Even smell sweet.   Come here.
 
 



©) Phyllis Jean Green,  2006




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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/11/2006

Poetic magnificence comes in "Candy Rain".

Keep them coming, Poet, the world must read You!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 2/19/2006
Sweet Pea... Candy rain, indeed! So sweet and sticky, raining on bared substance of something-essence...

A Masterpiece, in my mind, Pea-girl! Love the way you lovingly crucify/adore all selves/self. Candy lover, nevertheless.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Reviewed by Victoria Murray 2/19/2006
Loved this one! Thanks for sharing.

Hugs,

V~
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 2/17/2006
"thunder is only air clapping" Only YOU could write that line! There's a child in you who continues to bless us with endless imagination.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 2/16/2006
What a delicious way to see rain, love it Pea...I wonder what kind is in the puddles in my yard?
love and peace...Carole
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 2/16/2006
A beautiful write, loved it,
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 2/16/2006
Lovely, loving it. Candy rain, yeah. Peace, love and blessings.
Mikii
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/16/2006
Splendidacious...lol!!

Love it!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/16/2006
Intriquing images here that remind me of lying on the banks of a stream in the heat of summer neath that gentle rain. Perhaps the old hippie in me coming out.

Felix
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/15/2006
You are a trip Pea;-)... A rain to remember! Beautiful work!

Eileen
Reviewed by Saul Logan 2/15/2006
very well written; I am still just in awe of everything in this one...
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/15/2006
Pea,

Awesome imagery in this feel good write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine 2/15/2006
Ah, to dream. Very well said. R
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