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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
12/15/2008 |
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| there is great wisdom and humor in your poem Phyllis -- it is definitely though, not just for avian delight -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
12/15/2008 |
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This is a good be a human being poem. I like what you say
A potion or pill that will make
us behave like the "higher"
animals we flatter ourselves
we are.
I think most people these days take our existence for granted without looking ahead at the consequences. I red where Russia is sending warships to Cuba again. This is not a really good idea.
This poem is a dream that could come true if only everybody would stop trying to be the biggest baddest boy on the block. I am one who feels this poem tells a story of world abuse; wars, hate, bigotry, discrimination, my daddy can beat up your daddy types.
If we were to be without these things, this would be a wonderful world to live in. I agree with what John said too. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in myheart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
12/14/2008 |
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...lessons and hope...and wonderful wishes...are the whispers of wisdom we hear in your...secret.
very well written Phyllis...
John
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
12/14/2008 |
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| Excellent, Pea! '(Dark chocolate, pretty please-?);) |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
12/13/2008 |
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Brilliant write, Phillis!! If only the annual wish for world peace and good will toward all was more than just a passing fancy..sigh. Yes, if only we would "behave like the "higher" animals we flatter ourselves to be."...maybe someday, I am hoping it is soon. Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year to you and yours, Pea.
Take care,
Sherry
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
12/13/2008 |
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| Chocolate should be tax deductible for all females. Another magic secret that will straighten every thing out? I wish. I'm afraid it will take just hard work on the majorities part. Superb write. Thoughtful and wistful. Merry Christmas and hugs. Liz |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
12/13/2008 |
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If only! A prescription to induce long lasting sanity. What a gift to fallen humanity that would be this Christmas. Enjoyed this poem a great deal.
Blessings and Merry Christmas
J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/13/2008 |
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A potion or pill that will make
us behave like the "higher"
animals we flatter ourselves
we are.
Now that would be the greatest gift we could ever receive.
Love that pic, and Merry Christmas to you and yours, Phyllis. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
12/12/2008 |
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| A great "bird "poem..Experssed well,, lessons to live by!....M |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/12/2008 |
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Robins one of my favorite beside the Mockingbird
I see them by the hundreds where my son resides
most enjoyable write
Love & peace be with you
William
Merry Christmas |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
12/12/2008 |
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Your words inspired by this bird is so uplifting..we can learn so much from nature...and life's precious creatures..well done!
Merry Christmas,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
12/12/2008 |
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Hello Phyllis and always such a pleasure to read what you express through your writing and this is one more fabulous piece with a moral we could all learn from the bird and nature as a whole. Watch those Holly berries though, not good for human consumption. God bless and a very warm Merry Christmas to you and your family....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/12/2008 |
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A whimsical poem with a wise message, birds are
a wonderful help to humans if we learn their ways
Hugs, and Merry Christmas to you and yours,Phyllis
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/12/2008 |
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Great one and the picture is perfect for this questioning look at what it's all about.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
12/12/2008 |
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Phyllis, me and the birds in my neighborhood applaud
your delightful plea for sanity. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/12/2008 |
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Delightful write, Pea; love the piccy and poem! Very well written and illustrated; brava!
Merry CHRISTmas to you and yours; may it be your best CHRISTmas EVER!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0 |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/12/2008 |
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I have enjoyed the reading of "Berries History, Fear".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
12/12/2008 |
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Powerfully written and to know there is hope.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
12/12/2008 |
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I enjoy reading your words..
Merry Christmas... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/12/2008 |
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(((Pea))),
A wonderful write of hoping amidst chaos ... it shines in these lines of love and compassion. Well done.
Merry Christmas, (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
12/12/2008 |
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A deliciously dhewy confection that well rewards the careful reader's full attention. every word tells every image apropos
good write
j+
ps --- keep dreaming |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
12/12/2008 |
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| Oh yes it would be nice and wonderful wouldn't it. But this poem sure is. Love and hugs, Bonnie |
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