|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|I LOVE YOUR RHYME SCHEME - EXCELLENT! AND OF COURSE, THIS HAPPENS SO OFTEN...TWO PEOPLE FIND THEMSELVES NO LONGER IN LOVE WITH ONE ANOTHER AND THEY HAVE TO THINK BACK, THEY HAVE TO WONDER...WHEN DID IT HAPPEN? WHEN DID WE FALL OUT OF LOVE...??!! GREAT WORK AND ENJOYED, AMOR. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|So poignant Amor and so beautifully penned. I think many of us do the best we can at the moment. It's very sad that most of the important life altering decisions we make are made when we are too young to have the experience and wisdom necessary to understand such things. I know how hard it is to keep the heart focused on the beauty of life when we have witnessed so much of its other side and regrets are one of our worst enemies. Brilliant poetry as always.|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|we all have our own burdens, regrets and our efforts to rise above them. a masterful and emotional pen.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You convey so beautifully, so soulfully, the intense desire we all have to live life fully!
Your poem has such a genuine understanding of how we must face the infinite mystery of love and come to terms with it however we must.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|To dream of memories when our hearts danced
on a slippery stage. Love bestowed upon each
other in heart now captured in a swirl of
dreams. Splendid poetry Amor.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So much to transgress the reflections yet
keep the good memories strong in dreams!!!
Your poetry of this *Amor* is ~Superb~
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
This poem is very heart touching. So many people can relate to your tender words. Looking back, even in a dream is counter productive. We have to live with our choices and learn from any mistakes that we have made in order to have a more fulfilled life. March onward, spiritual soldier you are an amazing person and life is at your fingertips.
Thought provoking poetry!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Lovely write, Amor....this could be the lives of far too many of us....well done!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Your poem reads like a roadmap of marriage in America. Our lives are so bound up in routine that even love becomes stale when we continue along the same path every day. Everyone should read it before they contemplate marriage and not after they've had that first divorce.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|The heart has room to hold on to meomories cherished, the beauty to look back thru a looking glass is indeed a gift, we live and we learn as some just live...very moving words that many can relate to Amor.
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|For anyone who has attempted one, two, or even three attempts at that conquest of mountainous terrain, there is much to say for this poetic examination of what some might think the imponderable. Yes, one can work hard at controlling the conscious moments of attempts and failure, but during the free fall of dreams, one can only close one's eyes each night and hope the lack of resolve is waning. ...Why you still appear in my dreams..." well, sometimes clouds just won't clear to allow a successful attempt for the summit and the moment to finally claim: It is done.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your poem of love, a love not recognizing its own deficiencies, is bound to fall, wither, die and lose its sense of being ...
very moving and well written ...
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|this poetic offering is wonderful and
offers us much reflection Amor...everyone can benefit
from reading this too & taking the wisdom inwards
to look at our lives & those we cherish
it is sad when couples loose that spark for each other
Through Love's Bounty, Vickie
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Truly a moving poem written so heartfelt Laura
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|the future could not reveal itself so we never knew
but every mistake made had somehow left a mark.
This whole poem makes sense, Amor. Open heart and insert the weapon of time.It's what you do with that though that matters.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Ah, Amor, I could use every word in this beautiful/sad poem and it would fit perfectly for my first wife and I. Every word.|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|The good times and the meaningfulness of intense relationships like the one you describe are not easily put aside or forgotten, even after we 'move on'...Perhaps it is the nature of Love itself, and the memory of what 'may have been'...Love past or present often makes little sense...
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I see myself and my ex-husband in your words. So true!