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Sushi
by J.A. Aarntzen
Tuesday, November 03, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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This is my stab at a haiku.

Sushi

 
Taken off the hook
And is not cooked
Overlooked.
Storyteller on the Lake

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Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 11/6/2009
Now, how does one go from Cook and Me to a ku?
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 11/3/2009
a bit eerie for the fish! a good start to writing haiku but if i remember right, its sylables are 5-7-5--not sure, i havn't done much with them


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