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we see gathered
from eyes of lost souls
that we congregate
through the eyes of the mortal
aimless and helpless we walk
in the silence words don't talk
when we gather from other places
in the spoken minds of liars
and in the place of eternal fire
of another day, I fell from grace,
that we see in grace and lies,
when we know everything dies,
in eyes when we fall back when
prayers sink on fallen ears
as fears gather into a pen
when we ate all the bread,
and drank every drop of wine,
death is what crawls across the line,
another night I fell from the sky
all that would gather when we die
from the sleep we hear the bell
as it would echo its chime,
as death's air touches the spine,
another year, we fall in lies,,,
in when we see when gathered
in the years that we never known
of the 1000 years we fallen,
from the years of sleep
as we see the holes in the sky,
when the ashes turn to clay
when all the lost souls weep,
a closure burns away
as the fires become the fate
that I fall on the way
into the eternal flames,
for reasons I never repented
and I now live in years of torment,,,
born again within our darkest day,
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| Reviewed by Laura Via |
6/14/2004 |
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A mysteriously dark write about life and how things slip away ... and that last stanza really gets me. Damn fine write.
Lorrha |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/18/2004 |
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(((nickolaus)))
this is deep, dark, mysterious...and o, so damn good :)
were i to sleep in the arms of morpheus...i don't sleep so good anymore :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
1/30/2004 |
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| wonderfully freaky |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/28/2004 |
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| Dark and well written. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/27/2004 |
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| extrememly well written ... superb motif ... |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/27/2004 |
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| You are a wonderful exponent of gothic poetry! This is a great poem! |
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