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tribute to the victims of the E2 tragedy
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another night as it would appear of the norms becoming those that prayed for the death unborn within another night of a dead winter calm the walk of the ferryman looking into the night when it comes when the end of their life is due in a winter's night within loss in of breath and life the beginning of the death in the shadow of storms, when death comes in form of a slender palm, bodies piling down the stairs, coming in the fears waking to the years they lost, this and forevermore in demise coming without no form of age, piles of life as it crushes everyone around, scars of memory painted in blood red, as they were left between the trails of life and dead looking within the fires of death as they no longer breathe, piles of life closing in as it is becoming close to gone, closing in the passing of the years in form of white crosses haunted in time within a season of a long, cold February, The years that passed -- the victims in the grave, told from the passing of seasons, and nightmare screams, in the winter's winds, one can hear the names of the dead, from another night that would appear as a night of norms as in an hour become the endless storms of Hades, while they feel the cold, slender palms upon their souls, beneath a memory of years within the emotional scabs, tearing within a sign of unseen scars -- tearing away, hearing the deaf screams against the glass pounding for life which they had death greeting them, as from time ticks away, the slender hand reaches, when it comes among the souls they reaped waiting away for the nightmares within the pyre. the touch of the hand, their souls been sewn, as what is written in the eyes and stone, beneath a night as a long night in February
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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
2/26/2004 |
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| An OUTSTANDING write, full of depth and drama and the despair of impending doom... nice dramaticization of a dire human tragedy. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/18/2004 |
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(((nicholas)))
powerful, excellent write--i, too, agree with robert and mitzi and everyone here. :) *BRAVO!*
thanks for your kind words on my horror story. :) you're an expert, i'm still tasting the waters of horror :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/18/2004 |
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man.....this is outstanding!!!!
i agree with Robert for sure
very well crafted!!! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/17/2004 |
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| Excellent write!!!! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/17/2004 |
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| expertly crafted ... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/17/2004 |
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Wonderful write and great choice of words!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~ |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
2/17/2004 |
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| tragic and well written |
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| Reviewed by Larry Rochelle |
2/17/2004 |
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| Excellent tribute! |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
2/17/2004 |
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BRILLIANT work, Nick! I am really impressed, especially when you said
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as in an hour become the endless storms of Hades,
while they feel the cold, slender palms upon their souls,
beneath a memory of years within the emotional scabs,
tearing within a sign of unseen scars -- tearing away,
hearing the deaf screams against the glass
< < < < <
One caveat: pls whittle it down.. |
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